|Reviewed by Thomasena Martin-Johnson
|My mother told me, "if they know you, they will like you; if they don't, it dosent matter."
The flow in your poem is excellent.
|Reviewed by JMS Bell
|REFLECTING ON THE ONLY 'ONE' WHO POSSESSES THIS KIND OF LOVE. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|"...because of my love for all things..." is the heart of the message, the inner truth Asa has discovered and once discovered never leaves.
This is fine work.
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Amen! Amen! Asa this speaks volumes of the Love
Jesus! A very powerful write!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Parts of this make me think of Jesus and his sacrificing His life so that we may have eternal life. This is a profound piece that says so much more than any of us can begin to understand, I think.|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|The man has it down!!!
|Reviewed by Janice Beaty Hamilton
|...and I am at peace with myself... what a wonderful place to be! JBS|
|Reviewed by Mary Grace Patterson
|To look beyond and see the inner person is sometimes hard to do. If a person can get past the outer being and look into the soul , they can learn much ! There is a lot to think about in this poem written with wisdom and compassion! ....M|
|Reviewed by Richard Arrington
|When you find "my love for all things." you find internal peace.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Timing is everything they say, much to ponder here.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|"a righteous man can throw the first stone..." or keep his friends close to his chest and his enemies...closer.
|Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
|I would give my life for even my enemy!|