|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I hear it too and it is high blood pressure about the burst my eardrum. Or, it is a blood clot closing in on my heart or brain. ;-)
It just goes to show you how vivid your phrasing was and how I begin to feel your words pumping my blood and sympathetic rhythm. A pretty good trick I'd say.
|Reviewed by s g (Reader)
|Hi CJ, I like the positive message in this poem. Susan|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|I think JESUS will return within the next two years. I just have that spiritual feeling. Namaste--Peace be with you.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This reminds me of the song Richard Beymer sang in West Side Story -"Something's Coming". I can nly hope that something wonderful is coming my way.
This is nicely written and very well thought out. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|writing down adds to the anticipation, it's very neat. -Morgan|
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Marvelous outlook of anticipation.|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|I feel the anticipation in this piece. And yes, something wonderful IS coming if we let it. Love and harmony is on the way, but it isn't an outside force, it comes from each of us. What a great poem! Thank you.
|Reviewed by John Bidwell
|Thanks for a whiff of hope.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|I hope so as it cannot (hopefully) get any worse...e|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|This is wonderful!|
|Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Your words are so positive and uplifting; as I read, it is like the anticipation one experiences when one opens a present. Thank you, CJ. Love and best wishes,