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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
6/7/2011 |
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| OOoohhh...the dark has enfolded you into its being and you cease. Awesome. Really excellent writing that sucks the reader in and holds them. Love it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
5/26/2011 |
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Such mind pictures this brings in absolute vividness. From a caterpillar to butterfly and an egg in to a raven or black bird.
The line that really hits is ...Hug me...as though I mattered.
Rather apophatic, yet one kinda grasps it through feeling rather than the cerebral process. |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/25/2011 |
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Like the others, I have not grasped the exact meaning. However, the delivery is clear and very intriguing. Well written, if not understood by feeble little me.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/25/2011 |
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| Sheila, within each of us exists conflicting desires. We seek the excitement of change, the unknown. Yet fear potential consequences. To morph, is the epitome of the sum of those emotions. Cognitive dissonance versus the exhilaration of the unknown. To express those conflicting emotions poetically is a challenge. You aced it my dear friend. I bid you love and peace. Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/24/2011 |
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| this gave me the shivers, Sheila, beautifully written mystical poem! |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/23/2011 |
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| resistance to that "thing" that will fix it. Change can be good. supernatural...interesting mystical write. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo |
5/22/2011 |
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| It feels like you reached deep within to pen this piece, Sheila. So vivid and emotive; beautifully done, as always. Hugs, Elizabeth |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/21/2011 |
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This brings to mind Zeus's seduction of Leda;
but, too, it is unique Shelia Roy seduction,
alternative and personal mythmaking,
transformation of conventional rescue and security.
Beautiful and powerful.
Yes!
John
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/21/2011 |
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Deeply intriguing poetry, Sheila....uplifting....wonderful phrasing! Very nicely done indeed!
Hugs,
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Amor Sabor |
5/21/2011 |
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This is a magnificent revelation of the soul, although, to succumb to the mystery of the unknown can be mesmerizing, it can also transform one into a part of the darkness of which there is no escape. Always inspirational writing from you, Sheila
Amor |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/21/2011 |
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Stunning sheila, I love the way you make the bleak of black seem like it is not something to fear but instead an alternative to the white wings that not all of us are fortunate enought to be wrapped in.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
5/21/2011 |
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| Awesome writing sweet lady....well done indeed...stay safe and well....Hugsss |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
5/21/2011 |
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| Both intriguing and captivating, Sheila. |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
5/21/2011 |
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Ah the mystery you have unfolded in your metamorphosis is so intriguing one has to ponder what book is this going to be in. What a gift you have been given as a writer.
Georgexx |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/20/2011 |
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Your verses elicit much thought from me and you have awakened my imagination. Well done, Sheila. Love, hugs, and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/20/2011 |
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| I'm pondering what those black wings really represent. I'm thinking maybe betrayal (sat 5/21) Good insight here Sheilafriend, presented with style. You're a survivor who gleans from the testing. Blessings and love ... richard |
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| Reviewed by * Starman * * |
5/20/2011 |
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| Mothman (aka from the John Keel story and movie)? |
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