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| Reviewed by Lois Christensen |
4/24/2008 |
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| You are easily to call a friend. Your writings draw people to you. Take care of yourself and don't let your ship stray so far. It might come upon an iceberg. You are lovingly read each day and have many friends. This is superb and touching to me. |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
4/24/2008 |
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| Well done sweet man...Hugsssssss |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
4/23/2008 |
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| very clever! |
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| Reviewed by Susan de Vegter |
4/23/2008 |
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Wow! I don't think Gladys Knight worried as much for her Pips!
Smile>
Susan |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
4/23/2008 |
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You make the important point of ,caring for your friends!
Well said!
ET |
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| Reviewed by Stan Grimes |
4/23/2008 |
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| Enjoyed the cadence and structure, but what's a pip? |
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| Reviewed by Karen Palumbo |
4/23/2008 |
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Making friends is the easy part, being a friend requires a little more work, well said...
Be always safe,
Karen |
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| Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz |
4/23/2008 |
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| We wouldn't want you to be a pip... enjoy your friends and life. |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
4/23/2008 |
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| Enjoyed your thoughts Randall. |
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| Reviewed by Bonnie May |
4/23/2008 |
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| Very cute write, keep your hands on the wheel or where ever they are, not sure what a pip is, but it doesn't sound good to be left with. Love, bonnie |
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| Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader) |
4/23/2008 |
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| Very sweet and cute ditty you did pen this day! Cheers, Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope) |
4/23/2008 |
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| Excellent piece. love this one Randall |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
4/23/2008 |
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| I am the captain of my own ship. I will seek to steer her through the least treacherous waters. For I owe allegiance to my crew, to see that it is so. I am the captain, my friends in life my crew. What kind of fool would not see to the safety and health of his crew? Yep! Great poem. Not at all piposterous. Jon Michael Willey |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
4/23/2008 |
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LOL, too cute, Randall!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. |
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