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A Flu
by A PAX

Thursday, November 26, 2009
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Like a second skin of shattered glass 
Encased in pain, each movement lasts
In every crevice doubled pain
With each new sting, the old remains
Lungs inhale  fragmented glass
Every breath now thought the last
Drained and weak, join lack of sleep
Demon trio pound by heaps
Isolation ,darkened room
Germs and virus twin and bloom
Veining death, this cruelest flu
Best left
Bar B Q
pax A
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Reviewed by Sheila Roy 12/6/2009
You have a great sense of humor, Anita. Hugs,
Reviewed by Susan de Vegter 11/30/2009
I trust this DOESN'T mean you are ill and, if it does...then you haven't lost your Muse and your rhythm is perfecto!!
My blessings and love,

PTP (Pass the pork)
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 11/29/2009
A well written piece,excellent work.take care
Reviewed by Charlie 11/28/2009
Yeah, we shared it around here. I managed to get my two daughters vaccinated, but one of them got it anyway. Cepacol-- go buy some! --Charlie
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 11/28/2009
As you aptly write, the flu is not a bug, but rather an 800 pound gorrllla, tearing is apart from the inside

Reviewed by Jon Willey 11/28/2009
HINI, aka swine flu -- a nasty player in the game of human lives -- I trust the worst now far behind you? -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 11/28/2009
Lady across the street had "swine", in fact she shared it on Turkey day, wish she included OinkSip, will have to go to the pharmacy and look it up, LOL...Ed
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 11/27/2009
Hope you feel much better soon, Queenie.
Reviewed by John Flanagan 11/26/2009
The flu has just departed this house and I'm the one didn't get it (yet?) so I've spent the past week watching others go through what you say so well.

Reviewed by richard cederberg 11/26/2009
Where in the world have you been?
I still feel the afterglow of the
Blessings ...
Reviewed by Darryn Murphy 11/26/2009
good write take care
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 11/26/2009
Don't tell me you have the piggy flu: if so, you need to get some "oink"ment! Hope you feel better! I am sick too; have a bad head cold. Feel like ca-ca! My poor nose!!

Well done, and Happy Thanksgiving; seems like our Thanksgivings turned into TURKEYS!! (And that's NOT counting the Cajun-style turkey I ate!! LOL)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your fellow sickie, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :/ *ACCHHHOOOOOOOOO!!*
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 11/26/2009
Apt, timely, and meaningful verses; my friend just spent seven days off work because of the H1N1 flu virus. She's back at work now. Thank you. Love and best wishes,


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