|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|love the cheesy fumes comin' our way Belle!
Here's to you, YOU win!
Love Cher too!
The cave has no idea what is in store! Hear us roar...
Warmly,Warrior Lady Sheeeoox
STay Positive! Happy and STrong!
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|"Have you had enough of my cheese?"
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|This is brilliant, Belle. I very much like your upbeat Fonda's Fitness approach to the downbeat, deadpan pseudo-satirical drum Beat of the serious subject of Cheese. Tis all enough to make a caveman Howl. Make sure you don't let em all wolf your prize exhibit: Emmenthal for the Neanderthals... :)) K xx|
|Reviewed by Donald Beaulieu
|Hello Belle Rouge,
I'm new to game, but now I begin to see how stinky it all can be. I
brought a mouse }:] you see. I love the play on words and the coorelation to Mr. Ginsberg. Good Show my man!! Don
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...enough cheese here...to give one the crumbled blues...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Cute and very stringy of a write. Enjoyed the correlation between society and the "cave"....
|Reviewed by H Cruz
|Cheezy write, a good metaphore for ...|
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|And Belle bids you a fond-a-do you cave people know anything about bathing? Woops, that's the cheese smelling.
You don't win the door prize, Belle, you win the Grand Prize - a trip to Limburg-or is it to Hawaii?
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Yes you deserve a door for a prize...what kind do you like, we have various varieties...Ed|
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my ,excellent writing sweet lady...have a wonderful day...Hugsss|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|It's not from Netherland that cheese packet in red comes from?
Stop bitching! and by the way, you are overdressed for our chow nite.
Neanderthal the Elder
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|*applause and whistling* O, I love this: definately a Ginsberg-ian flavor, bold, sassy, I second you as winner! Well done, La Belle.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Ginsberg is one of my faves, as is Pablo Neruda: as are you: you're on a roll!
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|It's RAD, man! Totally rad! I can see Ginsberg smiling over this Belle. Yes a real winner here!! Ed, may I have another glass of Merlot? You guys really didn't bathe did you!
Love you Belle,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Now This Poem, I Can Dig!!! Ginsberg would be proud, and you might win lots of prizes with this one, La Belle!|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Got my vote...La Belle, better than any cheezy poem I could come up with on the topic...
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|What a mouthful of a blast, you tell em! love holly|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|Cheese Wiz! Better watch out when the mangy polecats CUT THE CHEESE, a greeny toxic mist wafts from their cave, killin anythang it encounters! LOVE YOU! Sissy|
|Reviewed by Ted Bossis
|More choosing * Oh my goodness.....TedSo|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Excellent write, Labelle; hope you are okay! You are in my prayers!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Wow Belle, do you want to tell us how you really feel? Wow this was very intense..everything ok?
Peace, Love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
That was pretty "Cheesy" if I do say so.