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A Darned Diet Coke!
by Mary E Lacey, Desertrat

Tuesday, August 05, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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(on the lighter side of life)
No more diet anything please!


 

Was tired of “diet” everything, I’d lost ten pounds,
So was going to be bad. A Pepsi without diet,
That’s what I’d have.   There was a vending machine
in the building next door.  There were no Pepsis,
Only cokes. Oh, well that wasn’t so tough, anything
was better than that crappy diet stuff.
Then I had a fight with the vending machine, it took my
money and wasn’t going to give me anything.
I kicked it like mad, until it finally gave up.
It finally gave me my soda, and I thought I had won.
Well, now I was totally broke, but I got my drink
Than looked at the label, a darn diet coke!

 

 


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Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse 5/1/2010
I laughed. Reminds me of the last hamburger I wanted to eat. I ordered a double double cheese burger with everything on it. I loved grilled onions. Got home, unwrapped it and had a shock. It was a double but only meat. No sauce eather. So, it wasn't my last hamburger because it went in the trash. That was 1981.
Reviewed by Carvin Wallson 10/15/2009
I really liked the rhyming scheme you used in this poem, it worked well for the overall light nature of the piece. I think we've all had frustrations with the crassness of consumerism and with vending machines.
Reviewed by Stephanie Murray 8/29/2008
Very funny, and cute. A nice little piece we can all relate to.

Stephanie
Reviewed by Ronald Hull 8/17/2008
Cute joke, this diet coke.

Ron
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 8/11/2008
Thank you for sharing the moment, Mary. I tried diet "something" once or twice and I thoroughly disliked it. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Jon Willey 8/9/2008
-- isn't strange how often times we get exactly what we do not want -- and as for vending machines, they are more like slot machines -- you know you are going to lose any time you use them -- just not exactly how -- very amusing write -- you gave me a spirit pick-er-upper -- thanks -- God bless -- JMW
Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 8/6/2008
I have to say that diet coke does taste nasty.Yuck! lol.I enjoy reading this poem.Putting diet on coke or pepsi is bad.take care of yourself

Edwin
Reviewed by Mr. Ed 8/6/2008
anything
was better than that crappy diet stuff.

I aree, totally! My wife is addicted to Diet Pepsi, and even one sip, makes me gag! I'd rather drink water than that stuff.
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 8/5/2008
Sometimes you just can win for losing, right?

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Shedding Light 8/5/2008
Sometimes pop machines act if they are alive.
I have had plenty of fights with pop machines
myself; and it is really sad when you lose a
fight with a pop machine ... been there and
done that. We have to wonder what this world
is coming to. Good write Mary !!

Harold M. Nash
Reviewed by John Flanagan 8/5/2008
Mary, it's lovely how you turn frustration to humour so well.
John
Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper 8/5/2008
funny, I hate diet sodas also
Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner 8/5/2008
ROTF! If you don't like diet coke, send it here: love the stuff. Been drinking it all my life. Does it help the weight? Nope. Just tastes good to me. Concur with Karen in a way (weigh?) - costs too much to eat healthy, and you know what "diet" is, right? DIE with a T. LOL Excellent write of soda frustration!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado 8/5/2008
I am sick and tired of diet too. No, being overweight is NOT good, but I wish the skinny people'd stop shoving it down our throats! Not everyonc can afford to eat healthy; if they do, they make it too expensive while the junk food is inexpensive, easy to afford. No wonder there are so many fatties about! And not everyone can exercise without risking their health (me, included). It's inSANE!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Good write!
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