|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|The Phoenix rose from the ashes..oh, that was another story..
Hilarious and imaginative poem.. good one!
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|So many smiles and chuckles on
this one *Patrick* especially for
anyone who is not good at math!!!
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Very inspired! Your first question is delightfully philosophical, and I love it, Patrick! Also, I could imagine that mass starvation of worms due to this new technology. Nice conclusion! Thought provoking and very funny stuff.
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Once again you have me in stitches! Hahahahaha! LOVED the last one the most! giggle
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Not a bad idea, but I wonder if Soylent Green wouldn't be a better solution. In that vision of the future, when we die huge processing plants turn us into Food Pellets to feed those still alive. If the predictions are right, and we one day soon have 10 Billion hungry human beings on this food short planet, maybe Food Pellets and Electrical Power from our corpses could be very useful for a time.
I do feel sorry for the worms, however. If we stop feeding them, they'll be dying off, too.
|Reviewed by Richard King
|I'm not as good with the math, but the materials saved by not needing a casket must save another 1500 kilowatt hours, don't you think? And no fuel used to dig the hole, seems to me like you're on to something here Patrick. Well done. Dick|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|From the beginning I thought that last line was coming & my condolances to the wife that wants to kiss that ash...Jurseeeeeeeeeey|
|Reviewed by Michael Hollingsworth
|So, so funny! You are talented my friend. You just lighted the world with these lyrics. May the power be with you.|
|Reviewed by Eileen Granfors
|Hilarious. I love the last two stanzas. Don't rush it, but I would love to kiss your ash. e|
|Reviewed by m j hollingshead
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The ultimate in recycling. Instead of letting us become fossil fuels in millions of years, just turn us around right now and push us into the furnace like so many Aushwitz fire logs.
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|lol Very well put to prose, Patrick.|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|Think of it Patrick, you'll be lighting up the world a lot longer than the midnight oil, there is one more burning coming up, ha,
Hugs! Jasmin Horst