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Mark My Words
by Ronald W. Hull
Sunday, May 25, 2008
Rated "G" by the Author.
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Mark My Words
I put down these words,
as pixels on light.
No matter the media,
these words have might.
They transfer thoughts,
to the page.
Once on the Internet,
they never age.
These words can uplift,
inspire and raise.
These words can sting,
and fill with rage.
Words are my way,
to learn and emote.
Sticks and stones hurt,
not my words wrote.
Read them and learn,
work through the pain.
With new insight,
you'll never be the same.
So mark my words,
with bloody red, please.
I learn from each remark,
set my mind at ease.
Spellcheck me well,
and grammar my prose.
Tickle my wits,
and keep me on my toes.
For life is the chapter,
and we are the book.
Mark my words,
there’s always a hook.
Copyright 2008 © Ronald W. Hull
5/24/08
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
5/31/2008 |
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| Clever and fun guy that you are, you should add that we review our reviews! I've made a few typos I've regretted. You're the rhyme master! |
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| Reviewed by Ofira Sephiroth (Reader) |
5/26/2008 |
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| Very creative write. |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
5/26/2008 |
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| superb creative gem a pleasure to read, Ron!...ET |
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| Reviewed by John Leko |
5/26/2008 |
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...well penned artistry...creative honesty...and recognition of this wonderful write...all found on the same page...no mistaking.
John |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
5/26/2008 |
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And you set your hook in me with this one Ron. Clever you are!
Richard |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/26/2008 |
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| Oh yes! This is the great stuff I have come to expect from your creative mind. "Mark my words, they're always a hook". Yes, yes! "Tickle my wits, and keep me on my toes". This poetry writing thing is a constant write, read, review, think anew. Back and forth, from me to you, from you to me. It is a wonderful process. Don't you think? God bless. JMW |
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| Reviewed by Randall Barfield |
5/25/2008 |
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| Tops. |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
5/25/2008 |
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I don't mind being told when I have made mistakes and I do let others know, also, but as a rule, I send them a memo instead of correcting them on the page. Here, I will tell you what I like or don't like about your offering. In a memo, I will let you know if I found a mistake. We each are human and none immune to error, but I do believe that discretion is generally appreciated. I like this one, Ron!
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
5/25/2008 |
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| Great write. Thoroughly enjoyed. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
5/25/2008 |
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Cleverly expressed, Ronald. Love and peace,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/25/2008 |
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| Me neither, as per Mr Sketchman below...Find Peace on your holiday...Ed & RufuZ (W00F) |
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
5/25/2008 |
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I don't mind being told of my goofs...
Good write....
Stay safe
Ron |
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