|Reviewed by gaurishankar chemudupati
|It doesn't seem quite so bad
When we are on our knees"your poem made me think a lot. These lines are like silver lining for the mood of disillusionment we often get into. Thank you dear Linda for sharing.
|Reviewed by Lori Moore
|Reviewed by Michael Jones
|My dear sister Linda this is a magnificent piece of poetry. So much truth and inpiration and we can do it if we remember always to trust God and live on our knees! Thank you so very much for this wonderful song and poem, can't wait to hear it. You have another gift recording spiritual and religious songs before God and the world, get to work: Alleluia!!!|
|Reviewed by Daniel Keith
|How beautiful this is. We have all faced these bumps and continue on. With the Lord guiding us we can make it. May God bless you every day of your life.
|Reviewed by Jerry Diamond
|You have to keep right on to the end of the road Linda
Never allow yourself to become downcast and discouraged, because if you only knew who was walking alongside you all the time, you would never fear again
Love and Blessings
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
|Very nice, Linda! These are the type of thoughts that are important to keep close to the heart and mind. Inspiring, and assuring to those in trouble. Hugs,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Sounds like the making of a great spiritual or even hymnal song, can imagine this being sung by choir ccompanied by soft guitar and organist...
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sounds great to me, Linda. I'd love to hear it sung. Love and blessings to you,
|Reviewed by Regino Gonzales, Jr.
|"Sometimes the tears are many
And you don't know what to do". Magnificent lines.
The song brings optimism, Thank You Linda.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|life is full of bumps, i try my best to jump over them ...
well written inspiration ...
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|very good verse Linda, some things do work out fine, take care|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Life truly seems to be throwing lots of bumps at us, especially these sad days. But you are right, we must take one bump at a time, asking for a little help, along the way.|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|What a beautiful write/song dear Linda. I love it. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|When we are on out knees that little bump on the road can appear unsumournable like a mountain, when faith should tell us it is only a mirage.
|Reviewed by Richard Arrington
|Moses traveled through the desert to the promised land. The pioneers traveled across the Rockies to their Promised land. My point is that sometimes the road is rough starting out, then it is smooth and the sky is clear at the end. I think your promised land is in your finger tips, because God gave you a gift for writing.|
|Reviewed by Cindy Tuttle
|Linda, this would make a wonderful song!I can say this becausse I love it as a peom. You are awesome!
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|sounds like it would make a great song to start your day with. LadyJ|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Wonderful, whether song or poem! I love uplifting Christian music. I could easily think of this as a song that would help me focus on the realities of God's presence and power. "For our light affliction, which is for a moment, works for us a far more exceeding and eternal weight of glory."