|Reviewed by DM Yates
|I love the message in this, but I particularly favor your last two lines. Beautiful.|
|Reviewed by Teresa Walker
|Chuck...when I read this it brought back memories of childhood..you made me smile today and remember the importance of stars and dreams.
Star Light Star bright,
The first star I see tonight,
I wish I may, I wish I might,
Have the wish I wish tonight.
Thank you for the memories, but more than ever the eternal stars of others that still shine bright.
|Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE
|We are stardust,
we are golden,
and we got to get ourselves...
back to the garden....
or into that celestial garden of rare delight...
This is a fine sonnet, my friend.
|Reviewed by J. Roseline
|so wonderful, never thought one can write so much on such a flickering phenomenon happening in the sky!|
|Reviewed by Diana Wiles
|A lovely thought provoking poem...
We are all Stardust....
Best wishes, Diana...
|Reviewed by jude ashiedu
|i did something similar while your is focused mine is dynamic...|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|I love the analogy. Yes, live, love and leave a positive mark. I love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by JASMIN HORST SEILER
|And you are shining most brightly with such poetry my friend!
Bless You! Jasmin Horst
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|beautiful with natures' flow
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Chuck this is stellar! Beautiful pen.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Very Good Advice,, and when I am gone I hope I sparkle like the eternal star.
|Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*®
|Contemplating the many wonders of Creation gives us many unique perspectives on our own lives. I enjoyed this fine sonnet.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
|Reviewed by George Carroll
|Don't know how many of us will have the effect of a shooting star but what we do on earth may last longer and have a greater impact than that luminous star in the sky.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Take some time to live life, love and think
while list’ning to life’s symphony’s sweet sound.
Very sage, my friend.
|Reviewed by Keith Rowley
|Excellent, A gentle reminder of life's brilliance and brevity.
|Reviewed by jude forese
|our bodies are fleeting and terrestrial, our spirits universal and divine ...
quite a wise and finely quilled sonnet ...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|You are so right, life is oh so short, but sometimes we do not realize it until it is too late....
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|Very beautiful sonnet, Chuck! We can live a lifetime in a moment!
|Reviewed by Andre Bendavi ben-YEHU
|It is an enjoable moment to be privileged to read a composition in major poetic art, ~ poemized with symbolic and emotional stimulating contents dealt wisely, ~ and poetized with superb lexis.
"Life Is Like A Shooting Star" is a poetic flower scented by Erato.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU