|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Sometimes no matter how hard we look.....we just cannot see....very nicely done, Asa....
|Reviewed by Ruan Burke
|We all have the choice to be blind or not. Many of us make the wrong choice but always we have the choice to correct our mistake - We have only to see it.
I do so love the tone of this marvellous literary portrait ...and ending with the question of self doubt - Inspirational!
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|THERE ARE TIMES WHEN ONE WONDERS, '...HOW COULD I HAVE BEEN SO BLIND TO THE TRUTH??!!!' AND THE ANSWER IS, LOVE MAKES US 'BLIND'...SOMETIMES. A SPLENDID, ARTISTIC WORK. WELL DONE! LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE(MOM)*HIS INSPIRATIONS|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|This is intense and dramatic, but drama with proper control and that's what makes it worthwhile.
You are talented and gifted, Asa, and never never give up on life nor on writing; more, please, from your strong voice.
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Asa these words are so very profound, with deep meaning
I found this poem very interesting! Keep on writing my
friend, soon and very soon you will see with your eyes,
your gift making room for you, be encouraged!
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Looking...and seeing...are two very different things....as are listening and hearing. This is a poem that touches the heart on many levels.|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Wow, excellent use of language with a ton of meaning behind it. Asa, you are a true poet.
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|A double meaning in this intense heart felt poem ! It draws the reader in and I can feel his pain! As humans we make mistakes and often do not see what is before our eyes.....M|
|Reviewed by Richard Arrington
|This is very deep with emotions. Some can not see the forest, because of the tree's. A very good write and thank you.|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Yes, our blindness comes, many times, from what we don't want to see, what we refuse to look at. It can be difficult to allow ourselves to SEE the truth.
Good job Asa.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|...we can look, but it is our choice to see, the blind may see more than you and me.|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|No one will be more blind that the ones that don't want to see.