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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
5/28/2012 |
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| air and silence are both insular and conductive of human emotions - are we not not most accurately defined by our enemies? - jude this is another searching rendering that teases the emotions and causes self examination by the reader - enjoyable work - I wish you love and peace my friend - Jon Michael |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
5/15/2012 |
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this is very lovely...and so very true
your poetry voice is beautiful
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Asa Seeley |
5/12/2012 |
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sometimes silence is golden...sometimes it is not, however, true enemies are to be valued so much more than...false friends. for it is said, if a man finds 'one' true friend in life he is richly blessed because in the end, your enemies cannot do anything to you without some help from your so called 'friends'. inflated; what we have here is a lack of communication. thanks for the share.
asa |
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| Reviewed by Axilea MU |
5/10/2012 |
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Air and silence, two essential elements that can be both devoid and full of meaning. Interpretation of such ambivalent states is very personal and I like the way you said this in few words. After all, air and silence are what separates us, but they also allow us to come together.
Axilea |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
5/10/2012 |
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Silence can be golden *jude* if
one listens to their heartbeat
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| Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd |
5/9/2012 |
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| Many deep thoughts here, Jude. |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
5/9/2012 |
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Jude, How very true!
Always,
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/8/2012 |
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| enemies at least have an opinion. It's the not caring at all that is more than disapointing. |
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| Reviewed by Ed J. |
5/6/2012 |
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Silence can indeed speak louder than words at times of decision. Wonderfully stated insight.
Eddy |
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| Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen |
5/6/2012 |
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those moments of painful clarity help balance one's perspective &
expectations. wise words to ponder, poet.
be well,
carolyn
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
5/6/2012 |
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Your poem is eloquently powerful!
Yes, I find willful silence to be cruel...distructive even.
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
5/6/2012 |
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| Aloof or aloft? That vacuous space that exists between souls when the babble of mindless pleasantries has ceased (indicative of Level One relations), or the high-flying field of both energy and heat so kinetic that it creates an illusion of vibrational stillness, as in your recent portrayal of "signing" (singing? vibrato?)? Your end quote would certainly lead us to perhaps interpret the mood as tragic rather than a triumph, but the fact that you "mentioned" the phenomenon prior to departure suggests this is a connection that has been more than superficially sustained. It's funny how we can, on the one hand, be kept afloat by the unspoken understandings that exist between kindred spirits (that say more than words ever can), whereas the incessant torrent of alien others' words can weigh us down like millstones. Another Judeaic all-conveying canvas that leaves interpretation entirely open-ended and according to each reader's point of view. An airy silence certainly resonates with me having just returned from the wilds of the windy northern moors! :)) xx |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
5/6/2012 |
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The silence breathless in it's emotion.
Excellent write Jude.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
5/6/2012 |
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A very poignant, and wise observation. I sense a bit of personal experience, or is it just a poet's creative license?
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
5/5/2012 |
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| So much more yearned to have been said...sad in my eyes~ |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
5/5/2012 |
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sense of disappointment is palpable, Jude;
betrayal may be too strong, but disappointment, yes;
asks the question who's side are you on
when the chips are down?
you said it very well.
Yes!
john |
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| Reviewed by neerja gandhi |
5/4/2012 |
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| absolutely, silence is best interpreted and well understood always.. :)best wishes,neerja |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
5/4/2012 |
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...and when it is over, in a very strange way, the haunting is really just beginning. Emotionally packed, very well done.
Take care,
Sherry |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
5/4/2012 |
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| So sad and so true Jude. |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
5/4/2012 |
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| well written! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
5/4/2012 |
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You capture your topic well and brush stroke it gently across the canvass of our minds...nicely done my friend.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
5/4/2012 |
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| You said a mouthful. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
5/4/2012 |
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| knowing the silence is the most sacred, this would be a beautiful gift to know such a one. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
5/4/2012 |
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| Profound! |
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| Reviewed by Terry Rizzuti |
5/4/2012 |
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| An interesting image, jude, I like it. |
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