|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Sadly, your verses express a universal and timeless theme of this life in this world. Your poem brings to my mind the song, "The Icicle Melts" by The Cranberries:
How, how could you hurt the child,
How could you hurt the child?
Now, does this make you satisfied,
Thank you for sharing this meaningful offering, Carol. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|It makes me angry to think anyone would treat their kid like this. I might be tempted to sock them and see how they like it.
|Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)
|This is always heartbreaking, I went to school with a little boy we suspected was hurt by his father. He always wore long sleeves to hide his burns and bruising. No one should hurt a child.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|A beautiful child not to be harmed.
Your poem Lily is a Light for all children.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A sad commentary on parenting. Thanks for reminding us.
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|So tragic, so sad. No young child should ever have to endure such abuse.|
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Lily, I know about abuse for I was abused...
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
a marvelous write about a terrible fact in todays life.
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|It's courageous to write about such a burdened subject as Child abuse. It touches me deeply as it will many.
What touches the most is: through the pain and the terrible fears, you write about love.
This is really wonderful
Thank you for this great work
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|An extremely touching and beautifully penned poetic work. One of your best.