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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/8/2012 |
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Each of us have secrets that we often take to our deaths for various reasons...some for love. You did this well Jerry.
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
7/7/2012 |
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Some secrets, we so wish, would never have to remain secret. How wonderful for what is in our hearts and minds to be open for all to see so our lives may go forward.
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/7/2012 |
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A song of hopes beyond the clouds
*Jerry* of amazing grace....
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/7/2012 |
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Jerry,
Great stuff as always i agree with everyone else.
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/7/2012 |
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this is a finely crafted poem, Jerry,
a delight.
Kudos!
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
7/6/2012 |
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| romantically clever and fun to read. ~ Morgan |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
7/6/2012 |
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| great rhyme, perspective and imagery ... |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/6/2012 |
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How wonderful! That last line packs a punch!
Love ya!
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/6/2012 |
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This is a banquet of cleverly heartfelt thoughts and images, and all written with apparent ease. Wonderfully done Jerry!
Ever,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/6/2012 |
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| You sure wrapped this one up on a high note..clear and splendid! |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/6/2012 |
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| For a guy who usually abhors rhyming poetry, this was a gem. There was just enough syncopation, enough tilt to the balance, that made the concluding line sing. Well done. |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/6/2012 |
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| Those last four lines could well stand alone; and they are the lines that will make readers want them for their own. How much do I owe you? ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
7/6/2012 |
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Unique, delightfully sentimental and a pleasure to read....
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/6/2012 |
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Words spoken so tenderly and dear Jerry as I agree with Anna, I Love the last line truly a fine write Laura
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/6/2012 |
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| Great stuff, Jerry and we all seem to agree that you saved the best for last. Standing O..... Dick |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/6/2012 |
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| This is one of your best! It needs to be in one of your books. |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/6/2012 |
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Oh my!!!! This is so sweet and tender it brings a tear...and that last line is pure magic!!!!
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/6/2012 |
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| This is a pretty & nice write and I have to say I like that last line, its an interesting thought for them to find a picture on your heart...e |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/6/2012 |
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In the days of technology and so I've heard, it's gone from county socials to internet meeting! How things have changed eh? Our world has advanced so much. What has happened to the romance of letters sent to soldiers, or a chance meeting in a park, or a gentle bump in a supermarket. Or the days when a lady dropped her kerchief and the gentlemen of her attention picks it up. Technology... although wonderful for those who are home bound, I am such an old fashioned soul I'll be that skeleton of a woman waiting on the park bench waiting for the good man to come along (laughing).
You've done it again Jerry, your mind is ever working to put out pieces of art in your writing.
Love and Light
Lily |
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