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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
7/18/2012 |
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| my 5th read and i came to the conclusion that whatever a maiden's prayer might be is probably best left unknown...cannot be less than devious ...methinks |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/16/2012 |
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Intriguing write, Jerry....certainly gives the reader something to chew on....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/15/2012 |
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Not surprising of our worldly man
named *Jerry* always exploring..
but such a tease at times
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/14/2012 |
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Now I'll probably be up all night wondering what your secrets are and where in the world that sly place is!!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/14/2012 |
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| Ah, the ever needling conundrum of trying to find the elixir to help the brotherhood of Neanderthal-macho creatures to understand. Well, it sure offers much to be written about. |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/14/2012 |
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Man will never understand...its been over 2000 years since He hung on a cross and man has NOT yet changed...or if you believe that man has been around since dinosaurs...then they have had even more time to understand this old world and all he has done is to make it worse, instead of better...
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/14/2012 |
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Keeping the reader in suspense Jerry as to what secrets are kept a great and very interesting write Laura
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
7/14/2012 |
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| Sly place or not, secrets rarely remain secret once awareness that they exist becomes prevalent. We all know now,,, you’d best prepare for the big rush my friend. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/14/2012 |
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| This could be read so many ways :-) Thanks for the sharing. |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
7/14/2012 |
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A riddle, to be sure!
Oh no not the dreaded engagement ring, followed by wedded bliss. Pal. lolol |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/14/2012 |
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Ok, secrets kept covered that
brought great emotion as you
hid them in the depths of yourself
As though, my thought only...
but you say an answer to "every maiden's prayer"
Perhaps as a man, not allowing others men or women
know the tender soul you are as you have had to
protect yourself due to past tragedies and sadness
perhaps I am wrong, just how I read it for myself.
Wonderful thoughts to ponder again Jerry!
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) |
7/14/2012 |
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You make me curious what secrets can be the answer to "every maiden's prayer" and "to be revealed when men can understand".
I hope one day you will reveal them for us.
Beautiful deep thoughts Jerry
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/14/2012 |
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Jerry,
There is a lot said here for many to ponder. maidens prayers might should be left hidden from most men, you maybe should keep them in a sly place..safe and secret still. Too many might use them for ill.
Budd |
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