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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/27/2012 |
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Very much like salt and pepper
spicy *Diana* for food thoughts
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen |
7/26/2012 |
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I read this and was confused. I read this and got it.
I read this in the evening, I read this in the morning.
It expanded my mind. I read this and loved it, and it's thick brown arms. |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
7/26/2012 |
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| What a 'take out' this is...So very creative, as Ron said... Just plain crafty, Diana.... |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/25/2012 |
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I like your take on this! It is very riveting in a way like a good song hammers in the truth. Very creative and an original, for sure. Love it.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
7/24/2012 |
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| A dauntless expression that (to me) epitomizes 'free form' poetry. You tempt the reader to step a bit out of their personal comfort ruts. E.E.Cummings did that with his typographically eccentric work. The repetition (to me) typifies the humdrum of daily living. And the colorful imagery you've utilized is indicative (to me) of all those special moments each day that we notice, cogitate, and store away. The subtext (to me) is wonderfully telling of real life. Rock the Casbah! rlc |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/24/2012 |
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sounds as if you two took each other everywhere and then some...
budd |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/24/2012 |
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LOL looks like you took him everywhere! And it looks like you didn't care for how he took you!
Interesting :)
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
7/24/2012 |
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| I have to admit I became bogged down with the repetitions, Diana. It is possible a few could have been left out. Sorry. That just after you said I was probably a lot of fun kinda guy. |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/24/2012 |
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| This piece has a slow embrace, gentle at first, then evolving into a bear hug and suffocation. Wordsmithing at its best. |
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