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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/31/2012 |
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Love the nature of this *Jerry*
and brought back pleasant memories
of my own!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
7/30/2012 |
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Kool...Love the title too...
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/29/2012 |
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Love the rhyming rhythm of this Jerry. Another amazing poem
Loved iit
Peace love and light
Amber |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
7/29/2012 |
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| The woods are sizzling indeed my friend great write Laura |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
7/29/2012 |
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| cool structure. |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
7/29/2012 |
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Jerry, One of your top ten-Throughly enjoy!
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
7/29/2012 |
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I'll bet those trees were spinnin'!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
7/29/2012 |
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| Music in the words of these lines for me, the sounds very melodious with rhythm that did not falter. What a smacking ringer, the line: "Oh my God, I thought I'd surely die" . . . that is one turn-your-head cluster, full of energy and enthusiasm and life! ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/29/2012 |
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I'll rhyme with that any day!
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg |
7/29/2012 |
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| you took us back there with this one Jerry. |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/29/2012 |
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a wonderful write my friend that brings back memories
budd |
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| Reviewed by Odin Roark |
7/29/2012 |
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| Ah youth... when we didn't give nary a thought to the mind lest we miss out on some flesh. And, of course, our society keeps that fire burning so as to keep us as adolescent as possible to retain control over us. |
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| Reviewed by Kate Clifford |
7/29/2012 |
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| Hot write! |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
7/29/2012 |
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Youth, searching yearning, seeking finding, fear hope for acceptance, dreams and reality. Love... in all forms, in any state is ecstasy upon discovery..
Wonderful trail of experience Jerry
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
7/29/2012 |
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| Ah, sex in the cyber woods is almost as good as in the real woods or on the beach or on a mountain, or...e |
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