|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Love it when your senses shine
*Jerry* with awareness....
|Reviewed by Laura Fall
|Aw Jerry this poem is so sweet Laura|
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|a truly lovely poem, Jerry,
with fine understanding of our passions
and our senses
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|You are truly smitten!
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|you have oerfectly described how a known sound can elisit all our other senses when speaking of onw we love, bravo my friend
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|As so many critiques might opt to suggest in their demeaning way: how can one smell through the telephone? Such is their suffering, and your joy. Well done.|
|Reviewed by RWEHAVING FUN
|Nicely done, Jerry.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Ah!!! Sounds like love to me....I love the way you play with words, Jerry.....truly gifted!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Aw so sweet, it tells me how this person affects you and how you use your imagination. Reminds me when I was a teen and how I adored a boy who didn't know I existed. I would brush against him leaving the class room just to enjoy the moment.
Smiling, really wonderful Jerry
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
|Sweet and meaningful, Jerry.
|Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader)
|What a beautiful love poem, it says everything what she does to you.
Very much enjoyed Jerry