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Out!...Everyone Out
by pat medlin
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Out!

Take leave of this chaotic heart

all you demons of dullard

despair and sadness.


Drag with you all refuse

of clamoring doubts and whimpering fears

so that I might chart

in peace

this new course.


Chant no more

the annoying dirge

for this ended journey...

this predestined

ended journey.

Out!...Leave!

for I shall heal

and soar again.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

  
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Reviewed by Michael True
Pure poetry braveheart! M.True
Reviewed by jeanne watson
Wow ... what a great motivational poem. The energy throughout the poem is inspiring and contagious.

Enjoyed!

jeanne
Reviewed by Dark Knight
great thoughts-very motivational--well done
Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Hey you could be a coach!I'm convinced. Patrick
Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
Halleluiahs & Amen!!
May I Join You on Your Cruise?
(love your bio image on deck w/pen & paper & wine)
Sail On & Write On Board!!

Love's Balm & Healing Presence
Vickie
Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd
A lovely uplifting poem, Pat
Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Powerful ending...YES!
Reviewed by Janna Hill
Charge! That was down right inspirational Pat. Here's to healing and soaring.
:) Janna
Reviewed by Amor Sabor
This so reminds me of something I wrote long ago "OUT with the old and IN with the new...get rid of those demons who lied to you. Dispense with the wicked and the things that we fear. Throw out the evil self evident and clear. You're on the right path without any doubt. Make room for true happiness once everyone's out."
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Pat~
For I shall heal and soar again...peace in your heart mdf

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
While reading this, I felt ample resolution being not just realized, but well-defined. "..demons of dullard/despair.." "...refuge of clamoring doubts..." For me, the glint comes from these words: "Chant no more/the annoying dirge". The command of that clause holds no question. Strength comes off this page like a flexed muscle that had been resting and unapparent. ~~ Diana
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Why am I thinking Shakespeare? “Out damned spot!” Sounds like it's time to take charge and be positive about things. Bravo!

Ron
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
Oh, yes! You will soar!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
You go girl! Your words make me feel victorious for you. Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by Miss Wisdom (Reader)
This touched my heart. You are soaring already! <3
Reviewed by Edward Phillips
Pat: I drank too much last night on a harbor cruise. You have expresssed my feelings perfectly. Everybody out! For I shall heal and soar again. But not today...
Reviewed by Connie Faust
Somehow, this made me think of the time Jesus commanded the demons to leave a man, and they begged to go into the herd of pigs nearby instead. (they really needed a home, didn't they?) Jesus allowed it, but the herd of pigs then plunged over a cliff. Apparently, they were as upset at the prospect of devils' rule as you are.
Then, the song comes to mind..."Turn your eyes upon Jesus, look full in His wonderful face, and the things of earth will grow strangely dim in the light of His glory and grace."
God bless you, Pat, as you chart that new course.

Connie
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
give them the boot Pat make 'em flee for safety elsewhere
budd
Reviewed by D. Vegas
I know you will!

Deborah
Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki (Reader)
And by all means Pat, lock the door....Then soar as high as you can go. The time is NOW...lol

Sandy
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
That it! Give them fair warning and then pick up the soon-to-be bloodied meat cleaver!
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