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I Promise You This...
The sun was setting
That cold winter day.
I was shivering inside
As you looked into my eyes.
We made small talk
Trying not to cry.
You paused for a moment
I felt your heart sigh.
Won’t be back, you whispered
Holding me tight.
Too young to understand
Dear Lord, it wasn’t right.
After all of these years
I will never let go.
I promise you this
My Bro’.
Deborah Ann Tornillo
Copyright, 2012
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
8/18/2012 |
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| sad but heartfelt dedication-bless you |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
8/18/2012 |
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a very sad write deborah, very heartfelt and well written
budd |
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| Reviewed by Clarence Prince |
8/18/2012 |
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| It’s really not easy to forget a true promise, but God can do all things, Deborah! |
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| Reviewed by Sandy Hoynacki |
8/18/2012 |
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Your title caught my eye.....How very sad, heartfelt in every way. It brought tears to my eyes....
God bless,
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by John Domino |
8/18/2012 |
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This poem pierces the heart.
GOD Bless you,
John Michael
PS: Visit me soon on the den. Thank you Deb. |
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