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Courtyard of My Ambience by Vivian L Dawson Tuesday, August 28, 2012 Rated "PG" by the Author. Share Print Save Become a Fan

Courtyard of My Ambience Sad the vacancy I wait for you my long lost captain of the sea In our garden court from whence you left so very long ago I am adrift in the fragrances you so lovingly planted Amiss yet experiencing metaphorical changing of the guard as one phase is over yet the next one hasn't begun as I wait Planting details of your image in my mind's eye manifesting into dreams while my love remains paramount in remission until your virtual return (c) Courtyard of My Ambience 28August2012 Vivian L Dawson

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Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader)	9/6/2012

There is some really great imagery in this, "adrift in the fragrances" is inspired. You have maintained the thematic threads all the way through the piece. a fine piece of writing.




Reviewed by Mr. Ed	8/30/2012

Waiting is always the hardest part.




Reviewed by william goldman (Reader)	8/29/2012

ahhhh! memories of our youth, another time, another place,very beautifully done---------- lol hg




Reviewed by Christine Alwin	8/29/2012

Dedicated love blossoms~




Reviewed by Laura Fall	8/29/2012

So beautifully written and such a charming photo laura




Reviewed by Ronald Hull	8/29/2012

I sense some lost contact sailing the seas of the ethernet. Like the love of a sailor on the sea for years, patiently waiting for him to surf back. Ron




Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley	8/29/2012

As the wife of a late husband who died as a result of Agent Orange, I know what it means to wait in the courtyard a courtyard they built with love. Beautiful prose darlin' Love and Light Lily




Reviewed by Budd Nelson	8/29/2012

i hope his ship has docked in port and he stands with you in the courtyard you both happy in each others presence budd




Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader)	8/28/2012

hi lady vivian, another wonderful piece of work...i can feel the depth of all your words..always,,,,hug anna




Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger	8/28/2012

Lady Vivian ~ Lovely romance of the heart to await your love's return. Marvelous write in this courtyard of ambience. Lady Mary Ann




Reviewed by Cliff Long (Reader)	8/28/2012

You are becoming quite a wordsmith, mixing words as an artist mixes colors to create a surreal world as seen by no one other before you. A world of your own creation.




Reviewed by Jerry Bolton	8/28/2012

Ah, I live among the courtyards of New Orleans, and they are majestic courtyards in every sense and when you spoon, or meet these courtyards, you are urged along by lovers of so long ago.