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| Reviewed by Joy Hale |
9/24/2012 |
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It is so sad that a once great city like New Orleans is suffering from lack of tourism; vacant chairs there should not be empty. You did justice to one of my favorite towns by your poignant poem. May this beloved city recover soon to be the vibrant force of music and entertainment once again!
Joy L. Hale |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
9/20/2012 |
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| I think you artfully captured the shadow of this story. "...aesthetics of life now only/vacant chairs..." puts the vanish in the reader's eye. Placing in the ghost trumpet was perfect. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
9/20/2012 |
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Magnificent, such beauty to be preserved
You present your lovely prose with a wonderful
picture that is timeless as all these beautiful
things in life should be preserved in such
wonderful romance and setting
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
9/20/2012 |
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| VERY NICE POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by D. Vaineo |
9/20/2012 |
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President Bush stated it would take years to revamp New Orleans and it most likely will...throughly enjoyed,Vivian...
Deborah |
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| Reviewed by Rory Dall (Reader) |
9/20/2012 |
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| Made me think. Mother Nature sure made a mess of that vibrant city. the empty chairs analogy captures its present state pretty well. Hopefully the phoenix will arise once more. |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
9/20/2012 |
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| Sadly not the great city it used to be, and it's still struggling to survive. But I truly hope that it does; I've always loved its unique charm. |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
9/19/2012 |
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Thank you for sharing the very special ambiance of that place, Vivian. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
9/19/2012 |
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Vibrant place for vibrant sounds...life and death balance.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger |
9/19/2012 |
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Lady Vivian ~
Trumpet players to hear along with a Jazz band. Jazzy and crisp
the tunes resonate. A wonderful heritage. Enjoyed the city of
life and heart in your poetry.
Lady Mary Ann |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
9/19/2012 |
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| To lose famous landmarks and music such as the famous blues would be tragic, they must be restored and kept alive! You took me there~ |
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| Reviewed by ANNA CLOUTIER (Reader) |
9/19/2012 |
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| I CAN HEAR THAT TRUMPET PLAYING...AS I READ THIS WONDERFUL POEM IN HOUR OF NEW ORLEANS...WONDERFUL WORK, VIVIAN ANNA |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
9/19/2012 |
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| Nice poetry, Vivian, about one of the most interesting cities I've ever been to. The title with the New or Lean(s) is perfect. As we speak it is on the lean side of that equation. I live sixty mils from New Orleans, but don't go there much. I did my day and nights in the city though and have many memories. |
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