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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
10/6/2012 |
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Putting one in a dream state
of mind *Jerry* imagining
dreamy swimming..afloat
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/4/2012 |
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Awesome poetry, my friend! I floated away into a dreamy reality as I read it....
Anna |
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| Reviewed by Diana Legun |
10/3/2012 |
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| "I go to my illusion" has for me a 'homing pigeon' kind of solidity and security. "...my secret plans" is a juicy concept, as we can imagine enjoying our own version of 'secret plans' of one flavor or another. The tone of this piece emits a kind of hope "for me to see/even in their pretend" that really shines out and I like adding this piece to the array of your writings that I have been reading. ~~ Diana |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
10/3/2012 |
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I've read somewhere that this life is a dream within a dream. Your poem sucked me into your dreamy reality and I didn't want to wake up.
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/3/2012 |
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| A far-reaching poem, Jerry, don't ever stop dreaming ~ |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
10/3/2012 |
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Dreams can be everything, filled with beauty
love, terror, fright, desire, secrets within
our waking moments... and if the illusion of
this dream is one that you "shant" bury and
be evermore my wonderful writer, let them
whisk you away to the beauty of the secrets
held deep within you...
"I shan't
bury my dreams
and my secret plans
they'll turn out to be
my thoughts evermore
and down them I'll drift
in the light of my dreams
all of my wishes
for me to see"
Do you know how much beauty I see in that?
Ever flowing... and see you as you sit or
recline or lay floating into it.
Thank you Jerry for once again the wonderful
visions you give us
Love and Light
Lily
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/3/2012 |
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I think dreams are part of letting go.
Ron |
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