|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|the photo looks so brutal Dayvid
and your words unfold her pain
the depth so wonderfully expressed
Soothing Mud & Puddles to Splash
|Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
|Beautiful real life poem and heartfelt Dear Dayvid!!
Thank You for sharing!!
Love and Gratitude,
Suzie xoxox :-D
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|So very sad dear man well done indeed..stay safe and well..Hugss|
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|sad well versed Dayvid, cheers|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Wow, what an incredibly sad story, well told.
|Reviewed by The Poetess
|Ouch! This is very moving. My heart goes out to Sam.|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Powerfully sad, my friend.|
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Powerful, deep and so, so sad.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Dayvid, the pain of lost childhood stays with someone for a very long time...This is so sad, it makes me cry.
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Solemn, tightly woven words ~
Your poem, Dayvid, is magnificent!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Deep one, Dayvid. Nicely done.|
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|Sadness just keeps on and on. Chronic depression which you so expertly described, comes horrific events during young childhood. Excellent piece, Dayvid.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Another compelling and soul-reaching write, Dayvid. Well done. Love and peace to you,
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Hurt and pain is never forgotten, it just sits in the back corner to come out and haunt us another day. A great write Dayvid.
Newfie Hugs, Rose