|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Powerful in meaning expressed through metaphor, Carol. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)
|I think we can be our own worst enemy. But it never hurts to improve ourself if we can.
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|Excellent comparison to ourselves in life and how we achieve to be greater
|Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader)
|We make who we are along the way. Perfection can never be found, we just have to do the best we can and not worry about what others think of us. Just being happy ourselves is what counts.
|Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
|We all try to be perfect, we strive for perfection. And it are just the (little) flaws that make us individuals, unique individuals, interesting individuals.
You show us in a beautiful way the life struggle between perfection and individualism, between what the world wants to see and being unique.
Beautifully done, thank you
|Reviewed by jude forese
|good allegory! ... also works well for writing a poem ...|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|The last line is the crux of innocent art. "Reflecting yourself in every move of your hands" brought to me the image of children fingerpainting....reflecting themselves in every move of their hands. Their uberinnocent art, however, perceives no flaw. Wish we could still be like them. This poem sings of that wish, I feel. Beautiful song ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
We are as we are each perfect individuals just with variations.
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|The great potters wheel rarely shapes us to perfection. Therefore many seek miracle cures and plastic surgery to shape themselves into what they think they should be. Many here throw out a pot a day without caring whether they have trled for perfection.
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|How wonderful you write on how we try to mold ourselves Lily. I'm with Ed Matlack, Ghost and faults and flaws are life.|
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|The pic reminds me of the movie Ghost with Patrick Swayze...who cares about faults or flaws, we all got em' & gotta live with em'...e|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|So it is with life! Very nice!!
|Reviewed by John Domino
Jesus is the potter and we are the clay.
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Beautiful comparison between making pottery and wanting perfection,
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Whew! I almost lost myself tripping out on other thoughts as I read this beauty. And beauty it surely is. I absolutely love the ending as you build around the flaw in such a way as to be creative. Love it. Love it. Good touch!|