|Reviewed by Selena Dobbin-Gillis
|Truly written with passion and love. Love is a passionate thing of the heart and the sea, what can I say? Is another wonderful passion to have and I know speaking for our family, we all love the sea and the loves in our lives.
Love you cuz,
|Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G
|Oooooh this is a true favorite!
I love this and the flowwww of the waves as I read each tantalizing line and chosen word!
How you inspire my hearts desires Sweet Fee!
Thank you for this exquisite poem!
Warmest Blessings and Love, Warrior Purple Lady Sweet Sheooxoo
YOu can in dreams and hope is only over the shining horizon!
|Reviewed by Randall Barfield
|Yes, as Jude said... Cheers|
|Reviewed by Denise Edwards
|"Sigh!" Sooo lovley, Felix! I echo Sheri UY'S COMMENTS....BREATHTAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL! How I've missed the pleasure of reading you. Always a joy, and I shall keep this one is my treasure's chest!|
|Reviewed by Sheri Uy
|My, this is just soooo cute! A journey full of romance and passion. You sweep me off my feet, sweet man. Write on, poet!
Hugs (lots of it!),
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
A fantastic use of imagery to pen this heartfelt piece. Love it:) Sheila
|Reviewed by jude forese
|the love for the sea offers to your readers a sea of love ...|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|If Only...auh Fee. Your maritime romantic heart is what great epics of the sea is all about . You are a true man of the seas tuned to the song of the sirene.
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|Ahhhh yes the sweet smell of salt air in the lungs, revitalising the senses, awakening the mind to the mysteries of the DEEP within our hearts.. Give me a 40 ft Ketch and I'm outa here, weigh anchor and leave the hum drum hustle bustle boooooring land lubbers life style for a good few months at a time.
Must be in the blood, as GGGRandpappy was a Rear Admiral LOL, and he didn't like being ordered back to dry land by his overweight miserable dommineering brother just because.......Never mind!! LOL
So they sailed away for a year and a day, to the land where the Bong tree Grows, and there in the woods a piggy wig stood with a ring in the end of his nose.... U know the rest Fee teehee.
Be my reckonin, that they may have taken some Pie as well as honey and money wrapped up in a five pound note...
|Reviewed by Mitzi Jackson
|oh beautiful~~~~ that picture is beautiful!!!!
and your poem words that flow easily
caressing with the motion and notion
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|absolutely beautiful...love and the sea are two of my favorite things!
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|That was absolutley beautiful! Love Holly|
|Reviewed by Rafiriio Daniels
|This was a great poem! Help keep poetry alive! You are always an author to watch at the den!|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|WOw.........gotta love this one........excellent Felix!!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Oh Fee, this is so passionately sweet and steady..If only, you can get your wish to be fulfilled..Happy New Year, my sweet friend.
Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
|Well done indeed. rhyme and metre work well in this.
|Reviewed by RaeLynn Teller
|Fee, I love to see change of style but unless the words convey the thought, it is lost. Your passions shine through. Beautiful expressions of love and of the sea.
Like Rose, I couldn't find a favorite line. This flows so well. For a desert gal with only memories of her love of the sea, you took me there. A great place to be first thing in the morning.
|Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
|If only I could tell you how wonderful you are. [Started to say "this is," but it all goes together, doesn't it.] You are a wonder, Fee! Poem's beyond great!! 'Pea' <3|
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|a very wonderful write-well written and filled with emotion-|
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
Beautifully breathtakingly penned longing, powerfully penned...yes. Well done!!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
|Oh my,breath taking sweet man...If only..oh yesss...Hugsssssssss
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Oh my gosh this is Beautiful,,,Passionate,,, Stunning,, My favorite!
I lived on a sail boat on Marco Island back in 1982 , It really was a heartfelt expierence,, you took me back,,,,,, :)
|Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner
|If only...famous words I must say, many people wish for if only's...a very beautiful write and a fitting picture as well. :)|
|Reviewed by Rebecca Lerwill
|Wow, nothing like getting knocked off my socks at 6a.m. ... so beautifully composed.... so much passion at heart.
I love it, Fee!
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|...if only....Beautiful write, Fee; very well penned! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Hope you had a great Christmas; I sure did! :)
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wow Felix this is so touching, I was trying to reread and see what hit me the most I guess it was each line, thank you for sharing.
Love ya Cuz XOXOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Love and The Sea - both very passionate topics - and you pen them very well.|
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
The metaphors are outstanding. This is quite a masterpiece my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.