|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I love it! I have always identified with Alice.
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Not only is your acrostic rhyming, but it gives an insight into some of the characters of Alice in Wonderland. Extraordinary!
God bless you,
|Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
|I love doing this type of structured work. This poem is exceptonal well done.
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Russo
|I am terrible with 'form' poetry, but you managed to tell a story taken from the classic, beautifully with this Acrostic. Well done, Reg! ~Hugs, Elizabeth|
|Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
|What fun! :D|
|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|Amusing exercise, you enjoy having fun when you write Regis.
|Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)
|Reviewed by Daniel Keith
|A very nice write. You do have a way with words. May God bless you every day of your life.
|Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
|Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
|Regis....no poem is difficult for you to write my friend cause you write from the heart and you write with much passion and vision...fantastic write yet again my friend...cheers!|
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
|Awh, fantasy take me away. Love it. Liz|
|Reviewed by Joyce Bell
|INDEED, A RHYMING ACROSTIC IS NOT EASY, BUT YOU HAVE DONE A VERY GOOD JOB. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS, LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
|Reviewed by Donna Chandler
|Very cleverly written. I enjoyed the read .... it brought a smile to my face.
|Reviewed by Sheila Roy
This is a difficult style, but you made it look easy. I'm not a big fan of Alice, but I enjoyed this read. It's cute...Snugglebunny:)
|Reviewed by Chessly Nesci
|Regis, This is an excellent Rhyming Acrostic! Love Alice in Wonderland! Very well done my friend. HUGS,~ Chessly|
|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|loved it.....especially... Do not let common sense be swayed by your pride...some people are very proud dear Regis...what to do ?
the write is verrrrry veeery nice... good wishes :-)
|Reviewed by Lena Kovadlo
|To write an acrostic using the title 'Alice in Wonderland' that is about Alice in Wonderland seems an uneasy task, and you have managed to do a fine job with it. Flow seems good to me. I enjoyed the read. This is a good poem though I would not say it is one of your greatest.|
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|Wonderful work Regis. Much enjoyed. Your work is always so unique.|
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Quite clever, Mr. Auffray, Quite clever.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|That was quite cool, Reg...Ed|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Almost broke into a little Men at Work for a moment, and then remembered that the Mad Hatter was the result of mercury used during hat-making.
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
You have penned a wonderful Rhyming Acrostic!!
Very Nicely Done!! I Love The Story Line of course
& also the dancing rhytym as I read it too!
I still like that babbling brook poem best that you
did a few years back
...about the flatlands for some Indiana Woman :)
All My Love Always
Love & Hugzz XO Vickie
|Reviewed by Kate Burnside
|Goodness, Regis... ANY rhyming acrostic is difficult but one of THIS extraordinary length and complexity of subject matter might be thought near impossible to accomplish with any degree of continuity and success... Very well done! YOU DID IT! This reads perfectly relaxed and complete and remains true to the beguiling nature and dialogue of the original. Impressive! :)) xx|
|Reviewed by Inspire Hope
|Excellent Regis! Thanks for sharing your beautiful gift, and for reminding me of Alice in wonderland much appreciated! May the Lord bless you in a very special way!
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|well done, you captured the essence of this tale nicely|
|Reviewed by Janet Caldwell
|Oh Reg, you did great! I have only written one acrostic poem. It was one where I was mad at Alan (yrs ago), no one ever noticed as I did not point it out. Hee hee!!! Love & Peace to you! x|
|Reviewed by Handsum Hart
|Good penning Regis, a fun read this is.
|Reviewed by Barbara Terry
|This is really beautiful Reg, and you actually made me smile while I read this. I don't know if I would like to fight the Queen of Hearts though, but an adventure in a wonderland would seem to be great. I wonder though. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your den sister Barbie
|Reviewed by OnepoetGem *the Poetic Rapper
|good one Reg, however those without common sense, do not have to worry about it straying. cheers to your fears|
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Splendid writing, Regis, almost like a fable...well done
|Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
|This writing is well written, and I like the effects. I am not knowledgeable about poetry types, and I have never read "Alice In Wonderland", but this writing makes me want to. Thanks to you, Regis.|
|Reviewed by Holly Ibbitson (Reader)
|I'm impressed Reg, well done!|
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|You are brilliant Regis...Your wording is
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Regis,This is executed perfectly, a fun, fun read
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|And Tin-Man wishes not to get rusted...
If this one was difficult to write, you have showed us that DIFFICULTY is missing in your thesaurus.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|It certainly does look like it is very difficult to write. But you nailed this one perfectly. Great job.
GOD BLESS YOU
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Peter Schlosser (Reader)
|Damn, you certainly rose to the challenge. Yes those are difficult. A plus!!!!|
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
You did an awesome job here Reg. It is also timely, considering the movie just coming out. I think Alice would find your addition quite a tribute.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|i think this is awesome!|
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Wonderful Regis, you got this down pat.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Sandie Angel
|Regis, your poems are always so much fun to read, and always have a good message in it. I love your work!!
Sandie Angel :o)
|Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
|I am very impressed, this is just glorious!|
|Reviewed by J. Pajot
|Nicely done. I also love the old picture...remember that from when I was a child...all those millenia ago.
Always the best to you, Reg,
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|Well you may not like them much but you certainly nailed this one. Well done Reg.
|Reviewed by Sherry Heim
|Well done, Regis...gotta love Alice!!!
|Reviewed by Paul Berube
|Reviewed by steve Chering
|I feel you're evolving..to an even better writer and that's some trick to do,
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Nice job, Regis; well done, mon ami!
(((HUGS))) et amour, ton ami dans Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat
Everyone has to live in a fantasy sometimes. I'm sure we all wish we could be Alice. Wonderful write.
|Reviewed by Nicole Weaver
|My goodness Regis,
You are so darn talented! Bravo mon cher ami! I really like the poem. You will in no doubt win this poetry challenge.
|Reviewed by Leslie Hoffman
|Regis, difficult to write, yes, and you wrote it excellently. "Alice..." is a fun read, making it 'appear' to have been easily written--the sign of a skilled poet! ~leslie|
|Reviewed by Elisabeth Barstowe
|Well done! A thrill to read. Couldn't have guessed from this, that you find it hard to write in this particular style.|
|Reviewed by Ann Marquette
|Awesome job Regis.
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|i love this capture of Alice's Wonderland :-) Yes it would be fun to take a trip :-)|
|Reviewed by George Carroll