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Turning the Tide
by Morgan B Merriweather

Tuesday, May 31, 2011
Rated "G" by the Author.
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A lilac hush settles in subtle wisps in clouds

a charm that casts a blush of depth perception

wrinkled by the charity of the sun,

she wades in these nightfalls

high above her lost Atlantis.

As if relumed, the moon water reflects,

a flippancy of midnight’s surface

a levity pale and undulating it’s obsession wide,

eclipsed,  Goddess of the Sea heads under

her blue tears running wild in a current red

she turns the tide higher and higher

she turns the water lilac and leaves the morning sky red

 

 


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Reviewed by Laurel Lamperd 3/9/2012
As if relumed, the moon water reflects

I love this line - relumed, a new word for me.
Lovely lovely images.
Reviewed by Sheila Roy 6/25/2011
These images jump to life, Morgan.
Sheila
Reviewed by Paul Judges 6/9/2011
A very evocative piece, well done.
Reviewed by Andy Turner 6/8/2011
Metaphorically this can be read and seen in many ways.
The sun and moon giving her all the hues. Maybe it's her tears that have made the sea salty.
A delight to read. TY
Reviewed by CJ Heck 6/7/2011
Lilting, lovely, especially your imagery. Well done!
Hugs to you,
CJ
Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen 6/5/2011
yes she does...
well done, morgan!
best wishes,
carolyn
Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic 6/4/2011
Exceptional poetry..

Thank you Morgan..

Vesna :)
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) 6/2/2011
Beautiful writing sweet Morgan...just stunning indeed...sighhh...Hugss
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 6/1/2011
Goodness Morgan, what a beautiful flow this piece has all the way through with a sense of inner peace and serentiy...

Be always safe,
Karen
Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green 6/1/2011
U n r e a l !

LOVE it !!!
Reviewed by Joyce Bell 6/1/2011
THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS JUST AWESOME! THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by John Flanagan 6/1/2011
There is such a feel to this, Morgan,
otherworldly and spiritual and the writing
is quietly and elegantly confident
and just right.

John
Reviewed by richard cederberg 6/1/2011
Lovely and interesting correlations:
"blush of depth perception"
"charity of the sun"
all blended nicely MM
an intoxicating concoction
Peace and continued inspiration ... r
Reviewed by Christine Alwin 6/1/2011
Morgan you have painted a masterpiece, stunning!
Christine
Reviewed by Christine Tsen 6/1/2011
So lyrical and artistic in nature!
I would love to get a bucket of that lilac water.
Blessings,
Christine
Reviewed by Felix Perry 6/1/2011
This is so smooth and refreshing that it deserves a second and even a third read. With mermaids and oceans and the soft opague colours of lilacs...well done.
fee
Reviewed by John Domino 6/1/2011
Red sky at night, Sailors delight!

An enchantingly breath taking oceanic voyage!

Bravo!
Reviewed by Rose Rideout 6/1/2011
You always make your writings so interesting Morgan.

Newfie hugs, Rose
Reviewed by George Carroll 5/31/2011
Splendid poetry
Reviewed by Vivian Dawson 5/31/2011
Lovely rescue...ebbing a lilac tide by Morgan!

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by TONY NERONE 5/31/2011
Awesome, as is your normal writings.
Peace
Tony
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone 5/31/2011
I like her style, somehow mermaids come to mind. this poem is exceptional and I feel one of your very best.

Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Regis Auffray 5/31/2011
Lovely verses; truly a gift well shared, Morgan. Thank you. Love and best wishes,

Regis
Reviewed by Gene Williamson 5/31/2011
This, Morgan, is great poetry. Love that last line! -gene.
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) 5/31/2011
Hah Lummed. I learned that word w-a-y back in my Scrabble days, I think this is the first time I have seen it used since then. Good on you.

The Goddess of the Sea. When she has pain and all the emotions which go along with it, she, as we all do sometimes affects those around her adversely, as in higher tide. But she makes everything okay because she gives us a red sky and we all know what red sky in the morning means, eh?

Enjoyed this airy poem and was good seeing your posting again.
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