|Reviewed by neerja gandhi
|Beautiful...and charming :)|
|Reviewed by Gypsy Soul
Yes ur "Benjamin Franklin" with ur scribe My Friend a Sea change would indeed be good medicine 4 tha mind & food 4 tha Soul...
Blessed Be ! ! !
|Reviewed by Elizabeth Parsons
|Wonderful imagery. I could feel the storm winds blowing and the surf roiling.|
|Reviewed by chris stienstra
|Sung to the mistress who's salty breath steals the soul.....
Awesome write and put me out on the deck hauling the mainsail.
My very best
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Felix, I love the way you took us through the storm to the calm of the sea...well done.
|Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
|Written like a true sailor. Well done. Lady J|
|Reviewed by Southern Comfort
|I truly adore yore sea writes! HUGS! SC|
|Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
|And a hard one at that!!!
You'll get your calm days of sunshine and millpond waters, but most are rough and trying...perhaps another element would make a better one, try a soothing waterfall.
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Reviewed by Sophia Arbeau (Reader)
|Your writes seem to come to life. Kudos!
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Yes, Captain, Sir, can I swab your deck sir? I love the sea and all that it offers..Very nice, Fee.
Peace, Love, and Light,
|Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
|No one writes of the sea as you do Fee...well done!
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Felt the gentle "to and fro" in your words and could almost smell the sea. A calm sea is truly glorious, not to sure I'd like to be there when it gets "going."
a sailor's life for thee
breaking a heart in every port
all, just for sport.
|Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart
|I love this Fee, you are truly in character when you write as a sea captain.|
|Reviewed by Missy Cross
|The perfect ballad for all of us sailors. Love this!|
|Reviewed by George Thompson
|The sea has captured you and won't let go. Great write and a good story you've woven here.
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|A beautiful write dear Cuz as the love of the sea will forever live in your bloodstreams. You only share that love between you and the sea for sure, Than k you for sharing.
Love ya face Cuz XOXO, Rose
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|As an old sailor myself, I never understood "the fair mistress of the blue's" humor, calm for days rocking you like a mother with a baby, and next day, for no reason will start tho shake you like a wife that found you cheating on her.
But as long she's your mistress....
|Reviewed by Walt Hardester
As one who knows, this got me longing for her, my mysterious, deadly mistress. blimey and shiver me timbers.
A sailors life for me. Think I'll go to me boat this weekend, or next, at least, boy I sure do miss her....thanks buddy.
|Reviewed by Morning Star
|Beautiful written poem
Expressing your long time love affair with the sea!
Absolutely stunning imagery and tone
Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
You can take an old sea dog out of the sea, but can't take the sea out of the old dog. :) Beautifully inspiring, methinks I'll join you on the ocean deep! Well done, my (((friend))), hope you're feeling MUCH better.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|wonderful poem of the romance of the sea-|
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Wonderful write, Fee; very well done! BRAVO!
(((HUGS))), much love, and continued prayers for your heart~
As always, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|Many a man/woman have been captived by the sea... with all its great vastness can't help but take ones breath away. Adored your poem Fee, love Holly|
|Reviewed by Ann Scarborough
|Susan is right Fee! I could feel the seaspray on my face, the scent of the sea in the wind as it pulls it my hair!! Fabulous imagery and the Neptune, the God of the Sea, has pulled more than a few down into the midst of his world.
You are most talented, Fee. I am honored to know you.
|Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
|You my dearest mariner Captain are in your element with these sea worthy poems. I'm waiting for the coffee table book Fee. Show me the game plan. Your talent is here.