|Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
|A excellent write, well done! Holly|
|Reviewed by Jeanette Cooper
|We reach out trying to grab and hold onto love... then poof, its gone. Should we seek solace as Alfred Lord Tennyson did in his poem "In Memoriam":27, 1850:
I hold it true, whate'er befall;
I feel it, when I sorrow most;
'Tis better to have loved and lost
Than never to have loved at all.
|Reviewed by Lavendar Jazz
|Very nice writing...I feel it.|
|Reviewed by E. Richardson
|oh this is outstanding! Grand imagery, great flow and rhythm...superb composition! I must get in here and look up more I see.|
|Reviewed by Kate Clifford
|I've been in a relationship like that. Very painful and extremely well expressed in your words.|
|Reviewed by MaryGrace Patterson
|Strong emotions in this poem of passion, loss and lonelyness..
Sometimes its hard to walk away, but for the souls survival it should happen........M
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Ah the "ups and downs" of love. You have expressed them very effectively with your verses, Rafika. The photo captures the imagination as well. LOve and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Dale Clark
|I enjoyed this lovely piece.
Pluto in the 5th hour...Wow!
|Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
|ain't love grand? if this is love, then i don't like it!
Whenever I had dated lasses who would have long periods away, they were cheating...never take anyone at face value...
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...stretches of nothing...perhaps argyle socks...no elasticity left...to support the love of one...who chooses to come and go...leaving a prescription filled with pain.
excellent thoughts penned Rafika...
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Passionately written as if pondering over what once was or what one wanted the reality to be, nice writing...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|five houses!!!!! I admire Plutos stamina!!!!!!!
And talking about eruptions...I am melting already...
|Reviewed by D Johnson
|Excellent write, intriguing photo...
|Reviewed by Chuck Keller
|Ain't love grand?!
You've expressed the ecstasy and the PAIN of love very well.
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
|This one's sad, Rafika, wild moments of passion followed by days (days? Weeks? Months?) of drought. Excellently penned questioning, yearning - well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.