|Reviewed by Axilea MU
|I like it when a poem shows that the author is not afraid of telling things the way they are, even the darkest thoughts can be shared.
|Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
|Whew! Not much to add, but know that I [we] love you!! Take care. As they say, "It's always darkest before the dawn."
God bless you. Kathy
|Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson
|Sad, but let it all out William
|Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Get naked and go outside and dance in the moonlight. Cures those steel blues -
Interesting writ, a little unusual for you, I like it - but I'm kind of the most contrived author around.
She's lucky to have real love - all kidding and depressionism aside.
I know this isn't really "your" thoughts and nice experimentalism into the realm of the dark side of emotiveness. Kind of liberating in a way isn't it?
|Reviewed by Carole Mathys
|Filled with so much sadness and depression...I truly hope this is just some dark fiction you have written. If not, I am so sorry!
love and peace, Carole~
|Reviewed by Rose Rideout
|Oh William I am lost for words, it is clear that you truly love her and I hope she reads your words and if she doesn't come back I do hope you find someone who is worthy of you and the love you can offer. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
|Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
|ouch--i am so very sorry--this is not the way to get her to come back--my youngest son's father committed suicide--the most selfish of acts--please re-think this--no one is worth it|
|Reviewed by E T Waldron
|oh my William! Wish I knew words that could bring her back this minute! I'm praying starting now! Excellent poem, don't know how you did it...|
|Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
|Hope she reads this and hurry back to you very soon!!
|Reviewed by John Leko
|...you have penned some very dark verse here...yet in light...the final verse...yet holds perhaps a different meaning...within its sentence.
very well written William...
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|If she came home you would have no more "hideous" thoughts...ed|
|Reviewed by Georg Mateos
|Sentenced to death by old age, can't happen to a better man.
Inspiring you to sadness wasn't the intention, then again, the road to Hell is paved with good ones.
If the poem is not fiction, your pain are my pain.
|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Powerful pen, William; so very sad!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
|Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner
The aching loneliness just bleeds from these words - I'm sorry. Powerfully penned -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
|Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
|Powerful, sad and heartbreaking...but written to perfection.|
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Geez, William, Snap out of it! (Like Cher's famous line in Moonstruck)
Should I be worried about you? or is this just really amazingly well written fiction. This is quite a dark, uniquely written poem.
Much Peace, love, and light,
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You and Brother Georg have truly penned extremely sad and haunting odes to love today, my friend. And I truly hope much happier days are ahead.|