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My Venus
by Ed J.

Monday, March 30, 2009
Rated "G" by the Author.
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In myown life this poem is still unfulfilled lacking the name to be given Venus. This version I dedicate to two deserving hearts, Eddy and Chanti with my best wishes.


Poseidon bowed in query
As to Zeus he makes his plea
This protected heart grows weary
In my waters cold and deep
Copyright© 2009 Ed J



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Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) 6/17/2009
Aw, this is so precious, a beautifully tender write. Holly
Reviewed by Vesna Vanessa 5/15/2009
Methinks you KNOW what a Twin Flame is!

Beautiful work..


Vesna ( Croatia)
Reviewed by kg cummings 4/20/2009
Very impressive work with substance and depth from it's core. Your friend, Kathy
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart 4/13/2009
Such a heart touching pen, may his prayer be answered.
Reviewed by E T Waldron 4/6/2009
You picked two romantics and gave them a lovely poem to cherish together...Beautifully done!...

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle 4/3/2009
Excellent poem,beautifully written,take care

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan 3/31/2009
a lovely write
Reviewed by Dawn Anderson 3/31/2009
Truly beautiful...nothing more needs to be said.
Reviewed by m j hollingshead 3/30/2009
well said
Reviewed by Edwin Larson 3/30/2009
Hey...I thought I was the immortal one... :)

Thanks for the dedication Ed...a first for me too...usually I just get death threats and hate mail here..kidding ;)

Wonderful write...enjoyed!!!
Reviewed by Karen Palumbo 3/30/2009
Oh how lovely and endearing, such warmth in thise precious words.....

Be always safe,
Reviewed by Ed J. 3/30/2009
I was hoping you wouldn't mind. Best of everything to both Eddy and you, Chanti.

Reviewed by Chanti Niven 3/30/2009
Wow, this has to be a first for me. Thank you for this beautiful poem. I will treasure it and although I know Eddy isn't quite as mushy as I am, he will appreciate it just as much. I count myself to be extremely fortunate to know love. Only a poet could express it so well :-)
Best... Chanti
Reviewed by Cynthia Buhain-Baello 3/30/2009
A romantic masterpiece of True Love!
Wonderful, encompassing, and totally breath-taking!


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