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  The Gods Punishment
by William Bonilla
Wednesday, May 09, 2012
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The Gods Punishment

~~~*~~~

There's a thought
of a glorious image
embe ded
deep in my mind
of you
As you blest my vision
the last time
I saw you watching me
walk away.


now the gods
punishes me
for I am unable
to create
A song , An ode, A sonnet
A word, A line, A verse.


They have punished me
by drying my inkwell
Relieving me
Of my quill
Castrating my ability
to create images
upon the virgin parchment
Before me.


By: William Bonilla
D'Artagnan
12/13/2011




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Reviewed by JMS Bell
HMMM...I DON'T KNOW, WILLIAM. NOT A TIME OF REST, CONTEMPLATION... REFILLING OR RENEWAL? BUT OF PUNISHMENT?!! WE MUSTN'T EVER FORGET; WE ARE 'HIS' INSTRUMENT, NOT THE OTHER WAY AROUND...WE HAVE TO WAIT. BUT I GUESS EACH POET LOOKS AT IT DIFFERENTLY, HOWEVER...I AM GLAD TO NOTE THAT IT WAS A WHILE AGO THAT YOU WROTE THIS AND I TODAY I READ 'SHE CONFESSED'. WELCOME BACK!!!!! LOVE YA! MANY BLESSINGS AND MUCH FAITH TO YOU AND YOURS.

JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Given time, I am sure ur image will be created & such an image it will be...maybe its the virgin part u r having trouble with...? ;-)e
Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Your muse is gone? I don't think so, because this poem surely speaks to everyone. I see however, that you wrote it last year.

Let's do a collab soon. Much peace, love and light,
Amber
Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
i know the feeling--i have felt the same after my sister's passing
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Judging by the way you penned this one, William, you're not being punished at all! Great writing!!!!

Anna
Reviewed by John Flanagan
certainly an interesting way of
looking at it, William, and unusual, too.

i like it a lot

john
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