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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
5/23/2012 |
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A healthy man's reality that you
have richly expressed *Jerry*!!!
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
5/22/2012 |
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| this poem just flows....... |
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| Reviewed by Andy Turner |
5/22/2012 |
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Love how you do this Jerry, and keep your manhood in tact.
Pure quality. And bloody typical femanimal! lol |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
5/22/2012 |
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This is all so luscious!!!
I feel happy just reading about her and think she has it just right! She is the embodiment of passion and pleasure and it is much better to be betrayed by others than by oneself.
Love,
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
5/22/2012 |
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Sounds like quite a gal!!! Lovely phrasing, Jerry....
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| Reviewed by Richard King |
5/22/2012 |
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| Alas, to the men she is but a dream, to the women,,, a nightmare. Dick |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
5/22/2012 |
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| Have we not all had at least one experience as this...e |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
5/22/2012 |
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Truly Fascinating poetry Laura
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
5/22/2012 |
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Actually, if you look at it another way... perhaps she was not known biblically, but the angel of light to give comfort. I know it's a stretch (laughing), but I am a positive soul.
I have my reasons for saying this. You have used the light worker symbol which is a beautiful symbol and of course well used for this poem. People are drawn to a light of love because of the heart of the light worker. They give comfort and joy.
I live in a small town from which I am not from. I am a light worker, no matter where I am when out and about others are drawn to me. I have the gift of gab and can be comforting. Unfortunately (laughing), some of the old ladies here don't take kindly to it. Gossip ensues, but I am not bothered.
Beautifully done Jerry, you have such a wonderful insight and talent for writing. I always look forward to more. :)
Love and Light
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
5/22/2012 |
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Jerry,
She is that woman we all remember later.
Budd |
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