|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I'll just bet those lethargic waters are teeming with wild life!
|Reviewed by Ragno Donna
|Jerry this brings the song Blue Bayou into my mind. Roll On!
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|There would be nothing more beautiful Jerry than to sit in such a place for you can ponder many beautiful and thoughtful things. Answers always come in time and usually before the big step conditioned or not.
Lovely as always
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|looks like a beautiful place to be asking those questions.|
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Roll On *Jerry* with your thought process,
reeling in so many unanswered questions...
as it is all in the living that counts!!!!
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Thats it, those last two lines say it, unfortunately...e|
|Reviewed by Vesper Darby
|mmmmm jerry...there are so many aspects here to mull around...the 'fragile as a pristine old lady...past his prime and worth'. never past 'worth' evokes sadness...good one jerry...p|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|As always, you make us stop and think... "...Aged heavyweight.. Past his time.... past his worth" Who among those of us beyond our prime has not felt that this shoe might well be a perfect fit... even as we struggle to find the words to express it this eloquently?
Another keeper.... Dick
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
we have both looked and asked, by the time we know the answers we will not be able to share the information, really liked the way you worded it as always.
|Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
|loved your philosophy upon your Bayou Lafourche|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|You are fortunate to watch the world go by, if ever so slowly. I can only view the world from my menagerie in my backyard or through that brilliant 42 inch screen that brings me all the scandalous trials and tribulations they call the news. Gives me the blues but that's something to write about.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|A wonderful, moving piece with such a cleverly done ending. You manage to have such an authentic and unique voice, always, and sometimes it's best to remain open to the mystery and just let that energy flow through us with fresh eyes as you do here.
|Reviewed by Odin Roark
|Such contemplation of life's conundrum is appreciated by few, abused by many. Such is the "conditioning" minions submit to, forever adrift like a leaf merely floating atop that Bayou. As your perception's subtext suggests, the real answers are beneath the water's surface light, deep within the fathomed darkness where light is appreciated as internal.|
|Reviewed by Diana Legun
|This has many qualities, but my favorites
are -- use of the word 'swallowing,' for that river, and 'meandering through woe and glad' and omitting the end of 'others for...' and connecting the words 'forGodsoloved....' Excellent, excellent. ~~ DIana
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|I love to do this type of pondering....very nicely done, Jerry...I don't suppose we ever find all the answers...but we're all moving in the same direction....loved this!
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|Great pondering Jerry. I believe we have had choices but being our natural makeup is water and electricity we choose the path of least resistance. And like the tributaries we are all heading to one place.
That + $20 will get you a hamburger.