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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
8/19/2009 |
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| well...if you insist :-) |
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
8/19/2009 |
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Render ME Helpless, sounds like a song!
A beautiful mystical song!
I love the passion, beat and your heart within this short powerful intense sensual lines Viv!
WRITE ON!
Blessings and Peace, Purple_Passion_Pulsing, SHEExooo
May your soul feel this! as you wrote it! |
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| Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury |
8/12/2009 |
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| A beautiful picture of sensual ecstasy on a romantic moonlit night! |
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| Reviewed by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart |
8/12/2009 |
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| What warm and sensual romance you pen Amber. Steamy and beautiful. |
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| Reviewed by Sheila Roy |
8/11/2009 |
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You brought the picture to life. Passionate and sensual. Love and Hugs,
Sheila |
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| Reviewed by ~ H (Reader) |
8/10/2009 |
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| A passionate, remarkable soul has written this...In admiration, love Holly |
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| Reviewed by Dale Clark |
8/9/2009 |
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| 'render me helpless!' love it, Amber, very sweet! |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
8/9/2009 |
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So passionately enthralling, Amber. Sweet!!! Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
8/9/2009 |
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| VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Dawn Anderson |
8/9/2009 |
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| All I can say Amber is, Holy Cow! |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
8/8/2009 |
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| i suspect more than your senses would be tantalized ;) |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
8/8/2009 |
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THE RHYTHM AND IMAGERY IN THIS 'STRONG PHRASED' WRITE IS COMPLETELY WONDERFUL. ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS.
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
8/8/2009 |
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| Amber , WOW! No guessing needed,plain and simple! Your passion is alive and well!Superb write! |
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| Reviewed by H Cruz |
8/8/2009 |
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| No beating around the bush here; candid concubinage! |
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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
8/8/2009 |
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| Excellent read here. Very provocative. Hugs, J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
8/8/2009 |
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| Wow - what a most powerful moon, it must be. |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
8/8/2009 |
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The moon's passion did this?..Wow...darn I need to check out that moon tonight...lol...this is well, I am with Karen...melted my coffee mug....full of fire and passion.
love
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| Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado |
8/8/2009 |
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Wow, Amber, this is HAWT!! I think you melted my glasses with this 'un! Holy Toledo! LOL GREAT write of fiery passion; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
8/8/2009 |
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Amber someone touched a match to your passionate side and it flared up to burn out of control in this sensual poem of want and desire. The eyes perceived, the body craved and the heart fell in love...
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| Reviewed by Georg Mateos |
8/8/2009 |
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Nothing will please and engorged more a lover than when she's crying uncle!
Georg
PS. as opposite of faking "it" :-) LOL
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/7/2009 |
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you sexy spicy woman....GRRrrrrrr.....render them men helpless! :)
and the MOON! Oh My Gawsh....Huge & Glorious the other night, this morning as I type this it is foggy & the moon has a beautiful rainbow sphere around her :)
Peace, Love & Moon Light
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater |
8/7/2009 |
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HOT! Guess you mean it! The "turn me over" part just bares your passionate soul, Amber...Render Me Helpless is very persuasive...I like the dire need in this...
Love,
Sage |
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