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| Reviewed by Edward Phillips |
8/14/2012 |
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A brilliant portrait of life in very few words: Without dissent life is nothing.
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
8/12/2012 |
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I used to dangle up until July 2012
when I got connected with some Jesus Juice :)
Through my blind eyes I can now see
(walking in faith)
I 2nd Steven Very Powerful!!
Love & The Lord's Precious Bounty
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Barbara Terry |
12/10/2010 |
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Many people will not get what this poem is about. But some would say that 'sweet dissension' is an oxymoron, others would say there is no such thing, and still others would be scratching their heads wondering what was said here.
You have taken the human condition and made it into a reality for us to see that our sweet dissensions flow through our veins unplugging a delicate trust, whatever delicate trust that may be. This poem has an ethereal quality to it. Thank you for sharing.
May the Lord Jesus bless you and always be with you, and walk by your side always. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, and (((((((((((((((((((((((((MANY, MANY HUGGGSSS)))))))))))))))))))))))), your den sister, Barbie
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| Reviewed by Steve Groll |
11/17/2010 |
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| Powerful concept. |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
10/7/2010 |
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| The devil made me do it despite my dissension. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by D Johnson |
10/5/2010 |
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Oh that devil called dissension can be so deviceve, and yes, usually beyond all reason or rhyme...great write Pat...
Cheers,
Dan |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
10/3/2010 |
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I read this piece aloud also and I enjoyed it. Then I read it to myself and enjoyed it too.
GOD BLESS YOU
TONY |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
10/3/2010 |
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| I third Christine, delicate tendrils of trust. This is a spectacular write! -Morgan. |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
10/3/2010 |
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Yes, Pat,
Christine is right, this poem stands the test of being read aloud
and with its fine phrasing, unbroken flow and superior word choices it is very worthwhile indeed.
John |
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| Reviewed by David Maclellan |
10/3/2010 |
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Those little niggling, wonderings that reside in the corners of our minds...I sometimes think that these are the emotions that keep the contempt out of the relationship that familiarity breeds. A deceptively deep poem Pat, I love it!
Best regards
David |
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| Reviewed by Carole Mathys |
10/3/2010 |
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The flow is rhythmic on this poem, well done
Carole~ |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
10/3/2010 |
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I have found this is a great poem to read out loud. My favorite line is "Delicate tendrils of trust unplugged".
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/3/2010 |
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| Enjoyed very much..Hugsss |
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