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4/14/2012 |
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| I am a fan of rhyme and rhythm, you accomplish both with a very romantic message. I enjoyed this. Thank you |
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| Reviewed by AGBO CHEKWUBE |
1/8/2012 |
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| Wish I were your pen,to be related to the great lines your thought conjure. That was lovely. |
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| Reviewed by INNOCENT AGBO |
1/7/2012 |
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| Wish I were your pen,to be related to the great lines your thought conjure. That was lovely. |
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| Reviewed by Steve Joos |
11/14/2011 |
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| The setting is a little bit beyond my pace, but the sentiment isn't. Nice work. |
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| Reviewed by Dark Knight |
10/9/2011 |
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| wow.quite the romance in this poem--well done |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
9/7/2011 |
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Love the setting You have
given for love making!!
~Chessly~
Forever to be in the glow!!!
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Raymond Sturgis (Reader) |
9/3/2011 |
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| Beautiful! Loved Every Word. |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
4/3/2011 |
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Yes, Chessly, there's much more to the beach at night than
stargazing. I wish I were there. -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill |
3/28/2011 |
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So sensually written! Erotic and playful.
Peace,
Dayvid |
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| Reviewed by Kate Burnside |
3/26/2011 |
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| According to an MSN-poll (!!), the world's 4th most beautiful naturist beach is a mere 20-min drive away from me here in the UK; sadly, it is well-policed by wardens on beach-buggies who would put a rapid stop to any such sheet-play during the day... but the night, well, here's to more shed-sheets than at a Greco-Roman fancy-dress party! :)) And here's to the glow of such sunsets that go down very, very slowly... Wonderful image-play here, Chessly. xx |
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
3/26/2011 |
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| BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
3/25/2011 |
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Wow! That's my type of "activity," Chessly. Thank you for sharing this sensuous offering. Love and best wishes to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Mary Lacey, Desertrat |
3/25/2011 |
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Chessly,
Very sensuous.
Mary |
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| Reviewed by Kay P Devenish |
3/25/2011 |
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| Wow! |
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| Reviewed by Diana Wiles |
3/24/2011 |
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So sensually uplifting...Roll on warm Summer nights on the beach!
Hugs, Diana.. |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
3/24/2011 |
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...your love poem ignites & reminds us all
that lover's passion is so perfect
& sultry & delish
& the pic....is wonderful
Sandy Toes & More
Victoria |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
3/24/2011 |
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| Never had any successful beach fun. Something about sand and friction. Patrick |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
3/24/2011 |
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A warm sensual write but one with so much truth that so many of us can easily relate to...well done Chessly
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
3/24/2011 |
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| very sweet! |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
3/24/2011 |
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| you nailed this one Chessly! Great pic ,too! |
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| Reviewed by Laura Fall |
3/24/2011 |
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Such deep and heartfelt words indeed well done Chessly your friend Laura
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
3/23/2011 |
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| PHRASES AND RHYME PRODUCE THE IMAGERY WHICH SUPPORTS YOUR THEME SOLIDLY. WELL DONE AND THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
3/23/2011 |
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Very loving, sexual words, Chessly.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
3/23/2011 |
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| wonderful. ~Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
3/23/2011 |
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Stirring and passionate ;-)
Ooooh, yeah...
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
3/23/2011 |
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Hot stuff, Chessly!
John |
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| Reviewed by Peter Paton |
3/23/2011 |
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You make it all seem so easy and fluid Chessly
Very romantic and hot.
Peter |
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| Reviewed by TONY NERONE |
3/23/2011 |
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Lovely expressed sentiments in this lovely work of art.
Love and Peace
Tony |
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| Reviewed by George Carroll |
3/23/2011 |
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| The naked truth comes out in this unveiling. |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader) |
3/23/2011 |
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| Ah, Chessly, quit beating around the bush, speak right up and tell us what's on your mind, you devilish sexpot ya . . . |
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| Reviewed by John Bidwell |
3/23/2011 |
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Ah yes- there is someone- and if she was here...
Perfect!
John |
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