AuthorsDen.com  Join (free) | Login 

     Popular! Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry
   Services MarketPlace (Free to post!)
Where Authors and Readers come together!

Signed Bookstore | Authors | eBooks | Books | Stories | Articles | Poetry | Blogs | News | Events | Reviews | Videos | Success | Gold Members | Testimonials

Featured Authors: C Schutter, iBelle Ami, iKim Glassman, iVenkataraman Gopalakrishnan, iJennifer Miller, iRalph Cates, iPier Tyler, i
  Home > Romance > Poetry
Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry     

Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley

· Become a Fan
  Notify me of new titles
  added by this author.

· 185 titles
· 2,715 Reviews
· Share with Friends!
· Save to My Library
·
Member Since: May, 2010

   Sitemap
   My Blog
   Contact Author
   Message Board
   Read Reviews


Short Stories
· The Gift

· Akashic Hall

· Determination V

· Determination Part IV

· Determination Part III

· Determination Part II

· Determination

· The Light on the Wall

· An Adoption, for what is meant to be will


Poetry
· I walk the Woodland Dunes

· You Illuminate my room

· There comes a Time

· Every Tear that's Fallen

· Nights Chirping of the Frogs

· Do you remember when

· When we are born

· People Lie

· I'm Just a Simple Woman

· It's been 20 short days

         More poetry...

Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley, click here to update your web pages on AuthorsDen.

  Candle Glow
by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
Thursday, June 28, 2012
Rated "PG" by the Author.

Share   Print   Save Become a Fan


Recent poems by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley
•  I walk the Woodland Dunes
•  You Illuminate my room
•  There comes a Time
•  Every Tear that's Fallen
•  Nights Chirping of the Frogs
           >> View all 176


Love is a River
Drink from it
~ Rumi ~


Candle glow
 

Candle light warmly how it doth glow
 
Releasing soft essences while ere she flows
 
Softness and warmth it sheds ere soft light
 
Caressing souls throughout the night
 

Hues of pink, orange and softness of white
 
Upon your face it casts tender light
 
Across our bodies details the night
 
Surrendering our souls in lovers plight

 
Every contour the shadow is cast
 
Warmth inviting two lovers’ contrast
 
As water flows from waterfalls path
 
Liquefying fluidly another recast

 
Trace with a finger the form be as one
 
Our shadow veiled nary undone
 
Borealis of light crosses our form
 
Resonance of colors bodies conform

 
Simple o’ candle the light which doth glow
 
Caressing two bodies for now they have grown
 
Unto each other a oneness to be
 
Nary to part nary eternity
 

Carolee Dennis-Woosley
June 28, 2012
 



Want to review or comment on this poem?
Click here to login!


Need a FREE Reader Membership?
Click here for your Membership!




Reviewed by Regis Auffray 1/16/2014
As I have stated before, the use of "Old English" is not my preferred genre in poetry. However, there is no denying the mood which you have recalled, recreated, and shared through your verses here. Thank you for sharing, Carol. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis
Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader) 9/13/2012
What a wonderful sensuous poem for two lovers


Di
Reviewed by Ed J. 7/1/2012
You describe well the beauty of light and love here. A candles light and warmth will always be seen and felt in a mystical. Love is the strongest light of all. I enjoyed this wonderful poem.

Stay well and keep writing
Eddy
Reviewed by Adriaen Valerius (Reader) 6/30/2012
You must be deeply in love to write so beautiful about it, every time again. This is how love is supposed to be, tender, romantic, beautiful.

Thanks Carolee, you fill my heart with warmth
Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader) 6/30/2012
Everything you write Lily is beautiful. You have a knack for describing such romantic moments. I can see through your writing as though I am there with someone I love.

I love this!

Gail
Reviewed by Shirley Houston 6/29/2012
I absolutely LOVE this write. Romance in its purity is so beautiful!!
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci 6/28/2012
This is so beautiful and so deeply romantic! As the wax from the candle flows so does the love.

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Ed Matlack 6/28/2012
Many a statement expressed,
Nothing more can I add,
But this you might have guessed,
But now I need a cold shower,
You have done so much to me with this write,
I find myself naked and full of stress...e
Reviewed by dan Rosenhagen 6/28/2012
Beautiful Carolee, such special moments painted on their bodies by the candle's glow
So sensual are the contours under its magestic illusions. and their souls then take on the shape and color of passion.
Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader) 6/28/2012
My beautiful Lily, so eloquently and descriptively you write of two lovers and the romance the candle brings to you both. Again, and agreeing with Budd what more can one say. Keep writing Lady Lily

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano
Reviewed by Budd Nelson 6/28/2012
Lily,
What more could I say That those before me have not said to this lovely piece. We all are left waiting for your next one. You have a wonderful talent, allow us the pleasure of reading it.
Budd
Reviewed by Edith Wilde (Reader) 6/28/2012
Just because I'm older, it doesn't mean I still can't see. You have a wonderful imagination Lily. Tender romantic moments with someone you love. How I miss those!

Edith
Reviewed by D. Vaineo 6/28/2012
Candle light is romance for sure and is also intense and erotic...favorite 2 lines- " Softness and warmth it sheds
ere soft light Caressing souls throughout the night "
Beautiful images you give us, Lily!


Always,
Deborah
Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger 6/28/2012
Loveliest of warm romantic light glow in oneness to be.

Lady Mary Ann
Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader) 6/28/2012
This is so beautiful Lily, everything you write is beautiful about love. To describe how you both become one soul and never to part. My girlfriend loves your poetry too. Please write more!

Mark
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton 6/28/2012
The candle shines it light on the budding romance and continued it soft love light as that love blossomed and grew. Very descriptive and romantic, Carol.

Popular
Poetry
(Romance)
  1. No One Else But Her
  2. Keep Half My Heart
  3. The Taste Of Love
  4. Prisoner
  5. I Trace Her Smile
  6. Lilly flower and the Bee
  7. A Chapter of Us (Book of Love) To Tiana
  8. I am lost, without you, my love!
  9. You Give Me
  10. Enchanted Wood: A Scottish Love Story
  11. Creating Poetry
  12. Intimately
  13. Wet Dream
  14. Romantic Ocean Sunset
  15. Gift of Love
  16. My Vision of Love
  17. Sunflower Woman
  18. Look into my eyes...
  19. When Love Dies
  20. Valentine's Day Dance

Authors alphabetically: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z

Featured Authors | New to AuthorsDen? | Add AuthorsDen to your Site
Share AD with your friends | Need Help? | About us


Problem with this page?   Report it to AuthorsDen
AuthorsDen, Inc. All rights reserved.