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| Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather |
7/10/2012 |
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| I have to stop reading really late at night, almost missed this......how are ya? ....of course, awesome poem. ~Morgan |
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| Reviewed by Aubrey Hammack |
7/5/2012 |
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Chessly,
I enjoyed this. You are a very pretty girl if you don't mind me saying so. |
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| Reviewed by Joyce Bell |
7/4/2012 |
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| THE IMAGERY IN THIS WORK IS VERY GOOD. THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS |
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| Reviewed by Christine Tsen |
7/3/2012 |
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Lovely melodic poetry, and it's great to read you again!
Blessings,
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
7/2/2012 |
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Where there is a spark, there may be a real flame. Lust is not essential for love to blossom, but it is essential for creating new life and the love that results from it. As your poem expresses, lust can be a powerful motivator. That's why I let it take me over sometimes.
Ron |
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| Reviewed by Christine Alwin |
7/1/2012 |
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...yes sometimes the hard part is keep that flame ignited, it takes commitment and strength..easier said sometimes then done..so good to see you post Chessly!
Christine |
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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
7/1/2012 |
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Such a lovely woman such as You *Chessly*
lust understod, but to highten into love
would be worthy....
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
7/1/2012 |
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Chessly,
I hope he stayed to get to know you.
Budd |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/1/2012 |
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Lust or attraction is easily satisfied but true love in two peoples hearts needs to grow and be nurtured...even through the hard times.
fee |
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| Reviewed by Mark Lichterman |
7/1/2012 |
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As a man, yes, even at my age, with all the beautiful women about, I fall in lust nearly once a day, but it takes a special someone and a special magnetism to turn that lust into something more meaningful.
Mark |
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| Reviewed by Jerry Bolton |
7/1/2012 |
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Good to see you, Chessly, it has been a while.
Yep. Lust is the attraction, and it can hold the flame for a while, but lust gets bored with the same old same old, and the hot fires subside and turn off eventually. Unless you have turned lust into true love it is a train wreck. |
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