|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|You have me "stumped" as to what you might meant by "doyen heart" and, as you know, I am not fond of archaic English (language in general). However, this is a fine romantic offering. Thank you for sharing it, Carol. Love and best wishes to you,
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Yes, Carol, love always finds me...when I was not looking for it!
Another top ten hit!
|Reviewed by Ed J.
|SO much love in this. Once fallen, truly fallen one may never again love wholey as only that one has spawned. I have twice written of of just such words spoken in dreams to one who sleeps. Beautiful poem.
Stay well and keep writing
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Such Love evermore be blessed
*Carolee* as You must be!!!!
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Glimmers of the heart romantic in poise of love.
Beautifully penned Lady Lily.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|Great advice about falling in love and the wonderful result so beautifully expressed in your last stanza.
Earlier, I started writing my poem this week, entitled, Moonlight Serenade. I wonder If our muses crossed when I dreamt the idea last night.
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|There is so much comfort in your words, "To feel nights wind about our souls" love this line, could actually feel that wind~ Beautiful poem~|
|Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)
|My dear dear Lady Lily, what a beautiful piece with a song in my ear and the love in your heart to this fortunate fellow. Again you write beautiful notes of love.
I bow and tip my hat to you
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|Falling in love amongst the stars - no better place to do so on the entire planet.|
|Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)
|The Moonlight Sonata is a masterpiece by Ludwig van Beethoven, composed in 1801 and dedicated to Countess Giulietta Guicciardi.
You composed a new masterpiece with the same name Moonlight Sonata.
A masterpiece full of beautiful love and deep romance, dedicated to the one you love.
Your heart overflows with love and beauty
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful Carolee
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Beautiful words melodically written with a true understanding what it is to love.
Much peace love and light
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|It's like I can sing your words to the melody, "Moonlight Sonata"....this had me drifting away!
|Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)
|Your words adorn what would be true love, filled with untold emotion which unveils in every line. What a beautiful heart you have Lily
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|a very beautiful romantic write with the full trueness of love written into it" So hold me now in tender thought/not lustful eye please oh do naught"
|Reviewed by Gail Delaney (Reader)
|What a beautiful poem! To have someone whisper beautiful words of love in your ear while you slumber, that would be a dream come true. What a wonderful love to have.
|Reviewed by Mark Huntsman (Reader)
|Beautiful Lilly, you know how to write it and I wonder if the person you love knows how to feel it. I like what Jerry said- Like new the air of early morn - For this my love you be reborn. True love is beautiful Lilly and I think you know what it is.
|Reviewed by Ed Matlack
|Just can't get into romance, but whatever others see in it, you do it quite well...e|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Beautifully composed, and why am I not surprised? Your cadence and structure in this beauty is like reading the masters' poetical love poems. Superbly ended with these immortal words, "Like new the air of early morn / For this my love you be reborn."|