|Reviewed by Michael True
|Made me think back to my early college days when every dream seemed possible and breaks between classes were spent cloud surfing with the soon to be mother of my children.|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|Completely enchanting poem, Pat! You put me right there....on the grass looking up at the sky......your home page is very interesting...especially the stuff about how your mother didn't write anything down....I feel the same about my precious Mom....I have only a few clever quotes she wrote down (her penmanship was a thing of beauty) and I treasure each one. Too bad she didn't keep a diary...I'm trying to do that for my children, but at least for me I'll leave behind stories and poetry that will tell them who I was.
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|This is a delightful poem, Pat. There is a small typo here: "We miht ponder..." I enjoyed reading this as it awakened vivid memories of my childhood. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Rafika Anderson
|Fabulous! I loved every word, every image, every verse. You really capture the sense and deep meaning of friendship and display it gently before us.
Wonderful writing, Pat.
Happy new year!
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Oodles of truth here. Now go try that chocolate covered cricket and let me know how it tastes. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
|Yeah...oh to be like a kid again! Good poetry Pat.
|Reviewed by TONY NERONE
|A very busy agenda planned. Well crafted.
|Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
|Tempting family reading that will have something for everyone, very creative...
Be always safe,
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|"It may choke Arty, but it ain't going to choke me." Our Gang. Childhood memories.
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
This is a delight, a sheer delight - witty, imaginative and very well written. As Christine says, I could linger here all day.
This I save.
|Reviewed by Richard King
|My best childhood friend is still my friend fifty years later. We talked a lot more fifty years ago than we do now and this is a great reminder of those days and those talks. Thank you, Pat.
PS Guess Iíve just been missing your posts because it appears as though there have been a number of them since I last spoke to you, Still, it seems like itís been a long time. I'll try to do better.
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|perfect for kids and adults, great poem. ~ Morgan|
|Reviewed by Connie Faust
|Transformed to a child again...just by reading your poem Why Don't We Talk. this is great, Pat, for kids or adults to read.
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Oh, I could just linger here on this poem all day!!!
This is a beautifully expressed message.