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| Reviewed by J'nia Fowler |
12/25/2008 |
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Icy indeed. Matches the weather we are enduring up here in western Canada. -23% c. What's that is Fahrenheit? It'll freeze your nose off in about a half hour or less. Gotta go turn up the heat now.
Thanks J'nia |
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| Reviewed by Sherry Heim |
10/29/2008 |
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I got up and turned on the heat. This poem speaks as loudly as a windchill factor, taking the cold of an icy morning deep within to chill the marrow of the bones. I can feel winter waiting in the wings. She is hoping she will deliver a spectacular performance that will leave us with a lasting memory of her. I hope that she is bland and easy to digest.
Take care,
Sherry
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| Reviewed by Sandra Corona |
10/28/2008 |
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This had me shivvvvering! Wonderous!
Sandy |
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| Reviewed by Michael Guy |
10/28/2008 |
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| chills, ills, thrills and bills! So your getting them too. Speaking of "Chills" - 40's this morning here North of Ocala, FL and it isn't even Nov. 1 Seems way too early. It seems just weeks ago "we" were all concerned with hurricanes and heat! I don't know, I must be in a time-warp. I'll be by again soon...Take care always, michael |
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| Reviewed by Jon Willey |
10/28/2008 |
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| a unique combination of Halloween and the advent of winter I would not have thought to use -- but then, you are the creative man with the poetic pen -- as for the reality of winter's chill -- pass me the springtime if you please -- I need to defrost this freeze -- peace my friend -- JMW |
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| Reviewed by richard cederberg |
10/27/2008 |
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| Good flow Ron ... The bill, the kill, this could be the prologue to 'Kill Bill 3'. I'll call Tarintino. (-: |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
10/27/2008 |
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A nice and well written poem,I enjoy reading it.take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by jude forese |
10/26/2008 |
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| excellent triplets ... "The Chill" fulfills ... |
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| Reviewed by E T Waldron |
10/26/2008 |
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Ron,
Very unique,halloween poem,
done in a captivating style!
Love,
ET |
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| Reviewed by Ed Matlack |
10/26/2008 |
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Helping winter to get past fast...
Happy it does make me...
...the acid pill |
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| Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader) |
10/26/2008 |
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| Oh my stay warm sweet Ron...great writing indeed....have a wonderful and safe day...Hugssssss |
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| Reviewed by Destiny Diadem |
10/26/2008 |
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Oh, I don't like winter and your poem reminded me that it's coming :)
It came upon a midnight clear.
It always comes this time of year...
...the chill.
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| Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson |
10/26/2008 |
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The chill will get us all..
Have a great warm day Ron... |
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