|Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado
|Awesome poetry, Belle; well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Texas, Karen Lynn. :D
|Reviewed by Jon Willey
|the proverbial carrot on a stick Belle, begging for the next segment in the hope of a great revelation - mystery is a cape of enhancement
worn with just the right touch of arrogance - let the pen drip endlessly with intrigue - I wish you love and peace my dear friend - Jon Michael
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|finely articulated and with the right
telling detail, the picture is excellently
built..intrigue, desire, uncertainty
and imagination..they're all here;
roll on, part 2;
strong writing, Belle
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|can't wait for part 2.......|
|Reviewed by jude forese
|lovely poetry, La Belle ... compelling scenario ...|
|Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
|I am riveted already. I want part 2 now. Nice set up. Be well, Kathy|
|Reviewed by Mr. Ed
|You've truly made me miss our Good Old Days of Spookfest Offerings here on A.D., and you've truly made me wish for the Response that would have surely come from devilish old Brother Georg Edvard.|
|Reviewed by Felix Perry
|As always your storytelling is perfect and ghostly, Georg would love it.
|Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
|Captivating poetry with the tune
setting the erie pace *La Belle*
|Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
|Our LaBelle is back, looking forward to more!!
I miss Georg so much at this time of year!
Peace, love and light,
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Love the music and waiting...for...part...2, Belle.
|Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
|Fantastic, I can only echo the others La Belle
looking for the follow-up
Love and Light
|Reviewed by Liana Margiva
|EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!! BEAUTIFUL POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva|
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|Most apt and timely as "the day" approaches and a fine response to Fee's challenge. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by T Jett
|I totally enjoyed it! Look forward to pt 2! Sexy, seductive and thrilling, Belle ...|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|Can't wait for the follow up
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I'm not sure whether this leads to romance… Or? Written with a certain amount of intrigue that peaks the curiosity.
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Lady La Belle ~
To entrance this mysterious peridot of eyes and cunning
movement like a cat.. Music of a harpsicord mesmerizes
the scene.. Excellent write, awaiting more you shall give..a mystery of the sailing ship necklace !!
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Love that last line, but liked the poem completely. You say you have no idea where this is going, but since this is Part 1 I know you will be back again with this woman with the peridot eyes. I await eagerly.|