A Few Thoughts From a Friend
by D L Johnson
Thursday, March 18, 2010
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My friend, Marge Shapiro has been honing her haiku skills, and they were all so good, I wanted to share them with all of you-dlj |
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A Few Thoughts From a Friend
I listen to the
sunshine telling me to smile.
Yelling,"Stop whining".
Sad eyes remember
loving arms, urgent passion,
whispers and kisses.
The homeless woman,.
tangled hair, smelly clothes, fat.
Once a beauty queen.
Imagine a world
with ubiquitous kindness,
laughing and loving.
Hallways of healing.
Bodies making adjustments.
Death always lurking.
Marge Shapiro
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| Reviewed by Regis Auffray |
4/4/2010 |
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Meaningful haiku, Dan; thank you for sharing them. Love and peace to you,
Regis |
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| Reviewed by Sheri Uy |
3/24/2010 |
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Nice kus Dan. Beauty in every set. Marge has a gift of writing haiku. Thank you for sharing. Peace and love in Christ.
Sheri |
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| Reviewed by George Thompson |
3/20/2010 |
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Marge is an "excellent" writer. Thanks for sharing these.
George |
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| Reviewed by Mr. Ed |
3/19/2010 |
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| I like them all, especially the very first one. |
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| Reviewed by F William Broome |
3/19/2010 |
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Thank you, Dan. Ms. Shaper's work is excellent.
My favorite, and worth saving i, is:
"Sad eyes remember
loving arms, urgent passion,
whispers and kisses."
My 63-years marriage ended in 2005. ,
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| Reviewed by kg cummings |
3/19/2010 |
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the thing about a good haiku is they paint a picture in very few words. imagery is outstanding in each of these.
Hugs, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Patrick Granfors |
3/18/2010 |
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| Dan these are good, perfect flowing imagery. Patrick |
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