|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|I like word play as well-well pat I think what you have written here is like me sometimes-I have thrown away some paper only to go back to it and go Hmmmm-well done|
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A fun write to read Most enjoyable
thank you for sharing
Love & Peace be with you
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|I love word play. You have done well, Pat. Thank you for sharing your wit and humor. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Duke LaRance
|Very well done...even if one tried to explain art (poetry) to a Philistine, he would still be a Philistine. I'm glad that I'm one of the lucky delirious ones....
duke larance ~ the drugstore cowboy poet
Muskodayn Bishkikee Ziishib
|Reviewed by Joy Hale
|Many chuckles over this fanciful zig zaggy poem of delight! I thoroughly enjoyed your offering, Pat. More, please?
Joy L. Hale
|Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather
|I like this, although you put it under mainstream, I see kid poem, One child always tring to cross the line and the other wouldn't think of it....well I guess that could apply to about any two people come to think of it. anyway, I had very specific little people in mind when I read this. :)|
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|How wonderfully lively and fun!!! Well done, Pat!!!
|Reviewed by D. Vaineo
|Pat, A delicious and breath of fresh air poem!
|Reviewed by Christine Tsen
|Irrepressibly unique and sonic and rich in imagination!
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|I jig with a line… But there are those who can zig or zag if they wish with or without a line, as long as they are being farcical in the process. At least until they run out of time. ;-)
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
|Punctual piddle-do's... forever ryhming with time.
Whimisical zig upon zag !! Hilarious ! Pat
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by John Flanagan
|i loved Sandra's, 'Pedal, Antoinette'
and i love this - they share a certain 'madness'
that's witty and so so clever and insightful
without being in the slightest preachy or boring
|Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
|Inventive word perdacious. Coupled with piddle I had to check my fly for damp spots because ya just never know. I prefer zagging to zigging but that's just me. What I really used to like was zig-zag, a handy tool of the 70's that I outgrew but sometimes wonder why. Patrick|
|Reviewed by Richard King
|That line you don't have,,,,, Well, it must have had a hook on it, cause you certainly reeled me in. Dick|
|Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
|Sooo funny and creative. Goodness.|
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|I'm dizzy. I say I am dizzy. But I made it through the minefield of tongue twisters with hardly a scratch. But I'm dizzy.|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|It's like you're darned if you do and you're darned if you don't! Well put!! Thank you! I had to chuckle!!
|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Very much enjoyed this clever write, Pat|