|Reviewed by Amor Sabor
|Your words are captured in the reality of relationships that are the walking dead refusing acknowledgement for far too long. It is like this in too many lives. This is an excellent write that could not have been stated any better than this.|
|Reviewed by Michael True
|So many carefully chosen words to say, no words will ever mask or make clear the message of goodbye. May the clarity of these words and your heart guide you to sunnier days. M.True|
|Reviewed by Lark Pogue
|You have just put into words my current situation, and this write is almost a year old. It does not get any better than this, tear jerker that it is.
|Reviewed by William Bonilla
|A well composed piece and a pleasure to read
Love & peavce be with you
|Reviewed by Regis Auffray
|The imagery and symbolism that you have used very effectively convey the theme of your poem. Well done, Pat; and thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
|Reviewed by Dark Knight
|wow-this is great poetry|
|Reviewed by Andy Turner
|Evaporation. We are no more than the morning dew.|
|Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse
|This is beautiful poetic literature Pat, and very spiritual
for me as I felt The Lord is Narrator & that in itself
is even more priceless to this poem's essence. Your poets voice
is lovely & beautiful, this is so much more than a love poem
Love & Heavenly Balms
|Reviewed by Duke LaRance
|"...bedlam that is us...." is so descriptive of all relationships.|
|Reviewed by Christine Alwin
|Your poem pierced my heart in so many ways~|
|Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
|I love the last part..."and are as dew drops falling on a raging fire." Fine writing!
|Reviewed by Diana Legun (Reader)
|In the 'write what you know' and it will show adage, you have, and IT DOES! Magnificent lines, Pat. I felt each one of them. ~~ Diana|
|Reviewed by Budd Nelson
|this is a most heartbreaking write of the pain in two people seperating after love has been shared.
|Reviewed by Lonnie Hicks
|A stunning piece of work. Out of pain, sometimes, courage and inspiration for others emerge.|
|Reviewed by Ronald Hull
|A poignant, wise, and calmly beautiful poem of deliverance from raging words.
However, I couldn't contain myself, because I do drop words from time to time. ;-)
|Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
A heartbreak of words no doubt the dew drops
have flamed the rising fire storm.
Lady Mary Ann
|Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
|That last stanza is so powerful!!! Awesome writing, Pat.
|Reviewed by D. Vegas
|Pat, Your words are like an angry storm with raindrops
|Reviewed by Kathleen Janz-Anderson
|I can hear the gut wrenching in your words. Very well said.|
|Reviewed by Edward Phillips
|Some give us only the sizzle and no substance.
You give us the "whole enchilada," and you set
the page on fire.
|Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
|Sorry to know of this situation, Pat, but hopefully both of you will heed this call for leaving in peace. Very hard to do. We want to lash out. To hurt. Hopefully it will not be the case here.|
|Reviewed by Janna Hill
|This is so painful yet so beautiful. For a moment my heart broke.
|Reviewed by Miss Wisdom (Reader)
|"words as dew drops falling on a raging fire" Wow!|