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When I Was Seventeen
by D. L. Vegas
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When I was seventeen
I met a boy I liked
And later fell in love

When I was eighteen
That boy was my first love
I lost my virginity

When I was nineteen
I was still in college
He was 300 miles away

When I was twenty
I finished college
Planning to join him

When I was twenty-one
We were at the same college
On campus he was with other women

And he lied to me
Telling me he was taking
Her to the store...etc.

Our relationship lasted
Nine years-
Four of those we were married

He is the one who asked
For the divorce
In actuality he did me a favor...

 

 

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Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Soul sharing *Deborah*
a release I pray..

Lady Vivian
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
The title got me to thinking about the Frank Sinatra song, “It Was a Very Good Year.” But then as I read your poem, I felt a sense of regret. My college relationships were all failures so I can relate.

Ron
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
SAD POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams
So many of us have starred in that story. I would like to give you such a hug because I feel the pain in those words, even as I sense a certain numbness or resignation. I applaud your ability to see his leaving as a positive. The rather dry way you tell your story, accentuates the emotional trauma, I believe, which is a very effective style. Cudos. Be well, Kathy
Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley
What as beautiful young lady you were
I had to mention this first :)
And it is a pity that he lost someone
so precious and loving but I must echo
the others, it's good he did you that
favor Deborah

Love and Light
Lily
Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Amen! Been there...except after 16 years I threw the lousy bum out! Nicely done, Deborah...

Anna
Reviewed by pat medlin
so familiar a lesson...bet you had gut feelings all along warning against the sad outcome ahead of you...so glad it was 4yrs not twenty ...pat
Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci
Yes, he did do you a favor. This sounds so familiar! Rejoice!

Love ya!

Jane
Reviewed by Budd Nelson
these can be the worst of our memories i have some too, glad you finally got out of it Deborah
budd
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