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| Reviewed by Vivian Dawson |
10/2/2012 |
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Soul sharing *Deborah*
a release I pray..
Lady Vivian |
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| Reviewed by Ronald Hull |
10/2/2012 |
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The title got me to thinking about the Frank Sinatra song, “It Was a Very Good Year.” But then as I read your poem, I felt a sense of regret. My college relationships were all failures so I can relate.
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| Reviewed by Liana Margiva |
10/2/2012 |
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| SAD POEM!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva |
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| Reviewed by Darrell and Kathy Adams |
10/2/2012 |
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| So many of us have starred in that story. I would like to give you such a hug because I feel the pain in those words, even as I sense a certain numbness or resignation. I applaud your ability to see his leaving as a positive. The rather dry way you tell your story, accentuates the emotional trauma, I believe, which is a very effective style. Cudos. Be well, Kathy |
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| Reviewed by Lily of Lough Neagh C. Dennis-Woosley |
10/2/2012 |
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What as beautiful young lady you were
I had to mention this first :)
And it is a pity that he lost someone
so precious and loving but I must echo
the others, it's good he did you that
favor Deborah
Love and Light
Lily |
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| Reviewed by Annabel Sheila |
10/2/2012 |
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Amen! Been there...except after 16 years I threw the lousy bum out! Nicely done, Deborah...
Anna |
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| Reviewed by pat medlin |
10/2/2012 |
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| so familiar a lesson...bet you had gut feelings all along warning against the sad outcome ahead of you...so glad it was 4yrs not twenty ...pat |
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| Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci |
10/1/2012 |
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Yes, he did do you a favor. This sounds so familiar! Rejoice!
Love ya!
Jane |
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| Reviewed by Budd Nelson |
10/1/2012 |
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these can be the worst of our memories i have some too, glad you finally got out of it Deborah
budd |
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