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Sage Sweetwater, unrivaled, bringing you the Upper Tier in lesbian erotica...Sage Sweetwater, the exceptional ARTIST of literary lesbian poetic prose...
tracks in the
new-fallen snow,
a blanket-wrapped
woman on the warpath,
heading for our coal shed,
little did she know -
marked with four
dead trees propped
up with rocks with old
white bed sheets you and
I fucked to shreds, landmark
that denote my heart and soul,
I barricaded our monogrammed
door,
woman on the
warpath staked out
my initials in green yarn,
snowshoe hare about to get
the woman caught up in her own
lair,
quail in their
isolated covey
feed, appearance
of a white-topped wagon,
1868, provisions in the law
let homesteaders take antelope
when in need,
ghost-like great
horned owl materialized
from nothingness, flew to the
coal shed, you played mandolin,
I took up the stove ashes, set the
coal bucket out the back door,
woman on the
warpath came for
the coal bucket, opened
the coal shed door, threw the
hot ashes inside to burn down
our passion, wasn't a coal shed
at all, was our white lightning cellar
exploding - woman on the warpath won't
come here anymore, day the coal bucket
back-fired on Babcock Ridge,
mercantile yarn bin
out of skeins of green,
Babcock Mercantile coal
shed where we get our coal
buckets filled now and again,
Ms. Babcock barricade our door,
deliver my pussy in the Night of the
Foal,
I...
Copyright 7/26/08 Ms. Sage Sweetwater, firebrand lesbian novelist
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Lesbian Western Novel
DOMINGA RIO OF CUERO
Release date late 2008
Screen Adaptation by
Sage Sweetwater
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| Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G |
9/2/2008 |
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The title alone, got me smiling, till my heart kept a racin' with all you began supplyin'1
What - Hell of a write!
I can feel all the passion within your writing SAGGIE!
Hail, like a woman scorned!
Awesome write!
Kept my juices pumping, with all your writing!
Movie soon, this is so Kewl SAgE and I'm glad A/D. don't make you change a thang'!
WRITE-ON!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Soulful Sheexooo
STay Positive! As your engine just keeps on rollin'....
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| Reviewed by Chrissy McVay |
7/31/2008 |
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Terrific write!
Chrissy |
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| Reviewed by Elizabeth Price |
7/28/2008 |
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| lol. Another adventurous journey through the struggle of finding luvin' enough. Woman on the warpath is a scary sight. Love it. Liz |
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| Reviewed by Timothy Flaherty |
7/27/2008 |
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| This is like riding a horse, western saddle on an unchartered trail full of sweet surprises. I enjoyed the 1868 reference. It's easy to get caught in the litany of descriptives that keeps the wheels turning down the page. Tim |
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| Reviewed by John Flanagan |
7/27/2008 |
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Sage, glorious runs and romps of imagination filled with energy and passion.
John |
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| Reviewed by Amber Moonstone |
7/27/2008 |
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You spin these tails mighty fine, Sage, Enjoyed this one...
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V" |
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| Reviewed by Gene Williamson |
7/27/2008 |
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Another'n to hang on my wall, Sage. What the woman on the
warpath did not consider was that if'n it rimes with bucket
do it... -gene. |
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| Reviewed by Jill curry (Reader) |
7/27/2008 |
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| wonderful twist to this tale..loved it |
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| Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan |
7/27/2008 |
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| awesome story with such a great twist! |
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| Reviewed by Felix Perry |
7/27/2008 |
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I love these early tales or "tails" from the old West, there is so much realism in them that you can feel the passion, the attitudes and the humour in each successive one.
wow.
Fee |
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| Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle |
7/27/2008 |
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This is a very good poem fill with a lot of passion.I like reading it,take care
Edwin |
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| Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse |
7/27/2008 |
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I Say Love's Passion Is Totally on Fire & The Sign
"Do Not Distrurb" means just that
BAM! Love's Fire Is An Explosion Of Many Emotions
& There Is No Bucket Of Hot Ash That Can Burn Down The Supplies of Gun Powder Rising To The Intoxication of Her Flames & Explosive Release
My Fav Stanza was tossin the hot ashes...awsome!!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie |
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| Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner |
7/26/2008 |
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So THAT was the explosion I heard - wow. Burning HAAWWWTTTT! passion in these fiery lines - great write, Sage, not exactly the kind of write I needed to read for a Texas heat wave - but a damn good one, nonetheless. Time for another cold chower! LOL Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. |
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